| "I Will Follow You Into The Dark" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: FIRE Tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2009 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOMENESS please update i know its been awhile but please continue its a wonderful story and i want to see kogas face bashed in. Though i like him in the show, i still see him as bad based on the type of character he is in the story.
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Reviewed By: minirowan On: February 19, 2007 23:54 CST
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you know, the way he's acting towards is pretty mean, but looks like he has good reason too.. or are you just trying to keep him in character when meeting new people? oh, i almost forgot, did 'ya have to make Inuyasha hit Miroku??! i wanted Kagome to that, it probably would've been funny too. wait, scratch that, it would've been better if Inuyasha had gotten his ears scrtached, but that's not gonna happen anytime soon....oh plz let it happen sometime soon! oh, and i can't wait to read how the arguments go on between those two, it should be good. great story!
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Reviewed By: minirowan On: February 19, 2007 23:37 CST
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T_T that was so sad! i still don't like character deaths, even if there wasn't much on them, but i guess it couldn't be helped right? **sigh** at least she's alive and well for now, but did she have to leave the rest of her family behind? that makes me even more sad. but then again it probably would have messed up the whole story, having extra people around, but Sango could have gone. then it would've been more like the whole gang was together for lack of a better word. eh, oh well. at least she got away. great story!
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Reviewed By: inuyashafanin2weeks [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 08:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really great story! i can't wait till you update, so i hope you do it soon.
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Reviewed By: Emerald Of My Heart On: January 09, 2007 06:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very creative. I like it so far! I can't believe you have so little reviews! These people need to sharpen up and R&R your story! I'm adding this to my favorites..you're doing quite well. I really enjoy the plot and how you have their personalities. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: minirowan On: December 28, 2006 02:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are right about this prologue being short. but i still like it! now, the chapters should just be a little longer, but i shouldn't be complaining, i get to have the pleasure of reading a great story!
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Reviewed By: Princess Tiger Lilly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 17:50 CST
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Yummy! Chapter 4 was especially good. I like how Inuyasha was becoming more articulate and the tickling scene was very good - belivable, sensual. The opening of 5 is also very good. Those scenes really drew me in. I'd like to see more of their like. Thruout the chapters, your depiction of Kagome is a bit inconsistent - she goes from strong to weak in a heart beat with little explination. Why would she go to pieces like that with Kouga at the end just when she was finally showing some courage and initiative? Seemed more like a plot device than something the character would really do. That said, over all I am really enjoying your writing and I am very much looking forward to the next installment!
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Title: update onegaishimasu!!!!
Reviewed By: sexy101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 02:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would have to agree with my fellow readers, you have briliantly presented this story and detailed it beautifully! please keep up the good work and update soon!!!!!!!!! thanks for your time, ~Tora
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Reviewed By: superstitious On: December 21, 2006 01:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying it, I can't wait for the next chapter ^^
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Reviewed By: yo sista On: December 18, 2006 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY. this is one of the best stories that i have ever read. it's so realistic and well versed. pleeeeease update soon so we can see what will happen to kagome next!!!!! :-)
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Reviewed By: inu - baby [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is SOOOO aswsome!! This is officially my favorite fanfic now, so please update soon!!!! Your new and always loyal reader, inu - baby PS I will review everytime you add a new chapter!
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Reviewed By: Esperanza On: December 15, 2006 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is awesome. i cannot wait for the next chapter. i'm on the edge of my seat trying to wait! because this is one of the best Fanfics i've ever read. Pleeeeeeez update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: WanderingAnariel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I can't wait to read the rest, it is very intriguing and well written. Please update as soon as you can!
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