"Just a Piercing" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: CherryOpsicle [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 02:45 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was just absolute enjoyment reading it! You did an extradionary job. The OCC-ness just faded into the background. Ichi with a stud. Ichi is a stud. Ah, goes well perfectly. XD
| Reviewed By: Gloria Stone82 On: December 25, 2006 14:17 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Yo. Story was neat. It caught my attention as no one else ever seems to think Piercings when it comes to bleach. :P I can defiantly see Ichigo getting a few. My only question was the actually piercing gun. You said they went to a parlor. I'm assuming as in a real piercing parlor not just some station at a wal-mart or Cato. If that is the case then the piercer wouldn't have used a piercing gun. Professional piercers use needles. I really like this story and I'm sure you don't want a lecture but piercing guns aren't looked on with much favor in the piercing world. They cause more trauma to the ear than just a needle, and they can be dirty as its hard to sterilize a gun. You should continue this, I think Ichigo would look great with his lip pierced. I could even tell you step by step how they do it as I've got six in my lips alone. :P This story is very original and unique and really hope you plan to continue with another chapter.
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