| "On the Wild Side: Smutletts" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2010 08:51 EST
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Title: So enjoying this!
Reviewed By: Roxotaku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 11:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I simply love, love, love reading your stories! So cool and amazingly hot to read Inu/Kag lemons from InuYashas first person POV. I don't think I have ever read better lemons written by a guy before. Thank you so much for these!
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 06:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I read 'em all, and I gotta say, you have a talented imagination. *giggle*
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Title: Smutletts/On the Wild Side
Reviewed By: vikikibouki@hotmail.com On: July 19, 2007 12:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! This stuff is FANTASTIC! I absolutely adored the lemons. Great writing.
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 22:44 EST
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Full Moon Payback was excellent. The bit with Miroku was perfect and the lemon bits were extremely hot.
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Reviewed By: aubreywitch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 23:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, PERFECT :D I can't imagine why people would be squicked by a rougher version of that. Okay, actually I can imagine non-bdsm people getting squicked but personally I would have liked it if he worried it was Sango or some stranger a little longer, like having Kagome kiss him and him trying to stop it thinking it was Sango. To me it's still hot cuz it IS Kagome, so really it's just fun to tease him otherwise. But basically I think you hit the reasoning to why it's hot, etc. perfectly. Great job. ^_^ I definitely hope you'll write more like this. *also, adding to my faves list*
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Reviewed By: aubreywitch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 21:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you believe I got interrupted in the middle of that by my roommate needing a ride? *headdesk* I have to say I loved the dominance in Kagome. :D She has such a fiery streak I can totally buy it. Plus I just LOVED Inuyasha reactions to the whole thing. I hate when they make the men into pussies during submission play. It's not fun conquering a wimp. So basically as far as the d/s play I'd say right on. ;) Kagome's abuse of her sit command is also hot as well. Mmm... next chapter. ;) Oh and I like the hinted possibility of a threesome with Sango (you know how I love threesomes... *cough*)
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Reviewed By: aubreywitch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 20:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I have to be honest. First person fanfic isn't my preference at all (I usually avoid it like the plague) which is why I hadn't read these gems sooner. :) Odd, because I tend to favor first person in original fiction... Anyway, I just have to say that I LOVED the prologue (you've won me over to this POV) and will now be moving onto the other chapters. I'm especially looking forward to the femdom you promised. ;)
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: January 07, 2007 00:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More great fics >=D You always start strong and you never lose momentum, not alot of writers do that consistently =) Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 14:19 EST
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You mentioned multiple partners in the prologue chapter... I'm really hoping they'll show up soon, since I'm always a big fan of a good Harem. And after all, since when do dog's stick to one partner? I could see Inu getting jealous of another guy, but I can also see Kagome being... 'accommodating' to another girl in the mix ;)
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 03:08 EST
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I think it's good to be able to let go when you write. I don't think you would get as much out of it otherwise and your writing is very good. I like it better in fact, with a little less discipline. For many people, sex is all about losing control and how far they let themselves go when they do. It's much more realistic to take the characters that extra step farther from anime and manga and into feudal Japan. I think this is a good thing and while I understand you don't want to alienate fans and friends, your friends are strong and I'm pretty sure they can all handle you doing something different, particularly when you do it so well.
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Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 00:44 EST
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Woof. Loved the full moon payback! Hhhmmm...so Miroku knows, huh? And Sango 'lent' Kagome her leather armor...so many plot bunnies to play with!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 00:25 EST
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lol, i can never get tired of your writing. the smutletts are so well done, and wow...inu in his youkai form had me worrying there for a while. LOL. awesome writing, glad to see inu got his 'payback' though really...when you think about it..LOL. man...interesting and rather intense, interaction with miroku also. LOL. poor guy must seriously of not known what hit him. LOL will never be able to look at inu the same way again, ne? You characterize a 'hentai' inu so well! (and that's the best kind). ^__^ awesome job with the story, keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: amhor56 On: December 29, 2006 22:20 EST
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Damn! I love the lemons. So sexy. Hope you have another one shot coming up.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 21:18 EST
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... I like these head games. They're very twisted at some parts, but I like them a lot, becuz the twisted-ness of it all just makes everything hotter. *wipes away drool* Cya, update soon!
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