| "The New Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 20:07 CDT
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UUUUUUWAAaAAHHGHH!!!!! That was so awsome!!!! I really loved that chapter!!! Naruto was so emotional!!! YAY! I wil be waiting for the next update, Please do it soon!^.^
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Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 02:32 CST
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Left eye twitches. It sounds to me like you're trying to insult me! OMG is just computer talk! You're really uptight Fanilia, it's their choice to write the way she wants! And what you said about their 'understanding' is only YOUR opinion, so don't come around here acting like it's fact!!! This is FAN FICTION! Not a novel!!!! If you want correct grammer, go read an actual book!! I hope u update really soon, I'd like to see Naruto's reaction to her pounceing on him!! ^.^
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Title: Administrator, Mediaminer.org
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 10:31 CST
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Sorry, but I must differ with the previous review. Changing the colour of the text instead of using proper structure and grammar shows a lack of understanding of the basics of English. Spoken text needs quote marks not to be coloured red. Thoughts should be in italics not in a yellow/brown. If you want your stories to be read by anyone who will give you more of a review then OMGOMGOMG!!!!!! Readers who actually knows please has more then three letters and non of them are z, then take the time to use basic writing skills.
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Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 22:47 CST
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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!! That was awsome!!! I luved it!!! this is goin strait to my fav fic list!!!!! I love how you wrote the dialogue in a different color!!!! It was so toatally tight!!!! Plz update ASAP!!! I'll be waiting and watching for the next brilliant chappie you're gonna produce!!!!!And I'll try to review regularly!!!^.^
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