| "Strength" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 13:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay okay i know i reviewed already but i still like it and i hope u update soon
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Reviewed By: buraindo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 10:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOT WHOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am so excited to read the next chapter, you really now how to keep an audiance at the edge of their seats!!!!! Wow, inspiringly good!!! I will keep checking in!!!
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic update soon the story line is great i was wondering will hinata be pared with the silver haired kid? that would be cool it would be unexpected like the rest of ur story
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 07:03 CDT
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Its no prob for me, i just cant wait to read their battle. I AM GOING CRAZY! that was sweet. thx for putting him in, and for the credit. thank u. and thx for calling him great. anyway, update, please. later...Dragon_Lord
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 21:18 CDT
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Its no prob. I covered everything on my character wen i thought him up. i was thinking that u should bring him in wen they r going to save Hinata. thats y i thoght up the idea of mostly dealing with family crisises. i think of everything :) so no need to worry, if u need more info, ask me. i will have an answer. if u didnt like the way to introduce him, i have another idea. u mentioned something about training. y not make him the trainer, because he wanted to know wat it would be like to have something like a family. just an idea, i have others if u didnt like either... Dragon_Lord
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story... while i was reading the fight part i got an idea that involves one of my many OC's. And a new one... uhh... u wanna use him? i am practically giving characters away. but not to any story. no. only a select few. mine, just simple curiosity, and passion. urs could be on that list. if u want the character, just email me. i will give u his desciption, if u want. anyway. keep up the good work, it is very interesting
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Reviewed By: buraindo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The splling could use a little bit of work, but I love the story line... Its exciting and I just kept on scrolling down the page, reading what happened next.. Youv really captured the scene well, and the drama is fantastic.. I will deffinately be keeping an active watch on this!!! :D
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 13:59 CDT
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Wow, that is like, fuck man, that's evil. Seriously. Anyway, like the fic (but kinda freaked out that you have Hiashi being such a dick. Anyway, keep writing, update soon, etc. Hopefully, everyone of importance, (everyone except Hiashi) makes it out of this okay, or at least, that they can recover. Anyway, later
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Reviewed By: AlixNix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 19:49 CST
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Pair her with Kiba, he is cool.
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Title: I like it.
Reviewed By: ShadowBlade539 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 12:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story sounds like it will be very intresting. Wich makes me wan to hear more of it please update soon.
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