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Title: Absolute Awesomeness
Reviewed By: nekokyttin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love it and hope to read the rest. I would love to see how you finish this off, I hadn't realized that you had added chapters until today, I had started reading it about two weeks ago (roughly). I just wanted to say good job and keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: MZephyr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 15:50 CDT
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I've surprised myself by enjoying this, as I'm primarily a Ranma fan, and usually avoid like the plague stories in which a rape is actually carried out. You've handled it realistically and well. The one thing that bothers me is, after Kagome had started recovering, I kept expecting her and Inuyasha to pay a visit to Akina. To let her know that someone believed her, and that her attackers would never do that to anyone again. I urge you to add such a scene in a future chapter, on a visit back to Kagome's family.
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Greta job, i love this!!!
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Reviewed By: InuKiKei [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love reading scenes where Naraku finally bites it in the end!! Having him rooted to the spot was a fantastic way of being able to keep the battle brief and to the point...I suspect your focus here was for Kagome to have her breakthrough moment ? and this was achieved wonderfully...too often final battles with Naraku are long, over done, too many characters involved, and too detailed with about 300 different things going on at once...if that had been the case, Kagome's moment would have been totally overshadowed....I thought this was just right, and I really loved how once again you brought Shippo in as part of the group doing what he could with his foxfire. Shippo gets too little credit in fanfics! Looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: tgathena [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 10:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought you did a very good job :) update again soon plz :)
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 03:00 CDT
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Great story! I love how you portray IY. Mature, and caring yet still masculine, i.e. the 'wild thing' we all love. Too many fics have him as whiny and childish, so it's wonderful to read him this way. Your Kagome is also strong, not hesitant and moping. I love it and will be looking for more!
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Reviewed By: i love kouga [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 01:34 CDT
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i love it dont go by my name a friend did it for me, i love the way you have made all the people so far. I LOVE IT!!!! gothic inu lover
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Reviewed By: coukosm On: April 10, 2007 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, out of all the fan fics i've read this is one of the best. They sound just like the characters. Great plot also. It's so sweet how InuYasha cares for Kagome and how he comforts her. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES Kikyo is out ^.^ sorry never a fan of her.... but if she never have been brought from the dirt that Inuyasha and Kagome might have gotten together quicker... for that i hate Kikyo but it is that she was a bitch all the time!! ^.^ but i LOVE i cant wait for battle ^-^ and dont worry take all the time you need for it :)
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Reviewed By: InuKiKei [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has gotten better and better as it has gone on, not just the story itself, but the storyTELLING. The chapter with Koga I could SEE happening as I was reading, and that's what a good storyteller does. My only criticism about the last chapter would be that the issue wasnt brought up at all about how InuYasha left Kagome "unguarded" to go see Kikyo. Right away when I read that I cringed, had I been Kagome my first thought would have been "Sure InuYasha, you love me and your so concerned about me that you leave me "alone" in the middle of the night to go see the Kikyo Chia pet." It would be an attack to her sense of security, because what he did was pretty stupid. InuYasha should have woken one of the others to sit up with her or taken her with. Just my 2 cents :) Hope u update soon!
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so update soon!!
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Reviewed By: tgathena [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter update again soon plz :) i love reading ur story
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 08:55 CDT
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P.S forgot to say but Australia rules!!!!! well more like Melbourne rules!!! ^.^ lol
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well im not much of an Koga fan.... but this story keeps getting better all the time!! your doing such a great job at this! just wondering is Naraku going to be in this? like this is on the edge but like to spice it up..... but i love it how your doing this!
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Title: fellow author
Reviewed By: ladyjulianna23@yahoo.com On: April 08, 2007 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say you have been doing a very good job and defending Kagome's honor and have a good idea of what a rape victim faces. Good for you. Thank you for writing a acurate portrail of what it is like. Having been a victim its refresing to see a good story with the subject being handled with respect and real life accuracy. Thanks! Julie
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