| "Do I Love Him?" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: hunterlism On: August 13, 2007 01:13 CDT
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hehe...it was the naru/oc that made me read this but good story! update soon!
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Reviewed By: DollFace [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 17:00 CDT
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this is really good so far! and im real picky so thats a compliment. haha. i cant wait for the next chapters!
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 07:23 CDT
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Not too terribly surprising, it was obvious she was going to lose, it was Kakashi after all. anyway good job, the only real problem is the spelling and grammer...Dragon_Lord
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Title: ah
Reviewed By: MoonAngel8 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 16:42 CDT
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i like ayama. she's weird but awesome!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: dd1127 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 16:17 CDT
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Nice fic u got here. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord(yo, still too lazy) On: May 11, 2007 19:46 CDT
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probably the best of ur chapters, number 3 is. a little unrealistic(all of them r) but good none-the-less. looking forward to the rest. and NarutoGirl^-^ u r acting ditsy, or something like that, i cant think of the name, but either way it still leads to weird...Dragon_Lord
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord(yo, still too lazy) On: May 11, 2007 19:46 CDT
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probably the best of ur chapters, number 3 is. a little unrealistic(all of them r) but good none-the-less. looking forward to the rest. and NarutoGirl^-^ u r acting ditsy, or something like that, i cant think of the name, but either way it still leads to weird...Dragon_Lord
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord(lazy, again) On: May 11, 2007 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
srry i forgot to rate ur story, but i remembered this time. ur story actually makes me THINK, usually i just know wat is going to happen. ur story is very interesting, i am looking forward to chapter 3...Dragon_Lord
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord(too lazy to logn) On: May 11, 2007 19:28 CDT
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nice first chapter, MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA good fight, she either got wat she deserved or was beat for no reason, i would say the first answer is correct...Dragon_Lord
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Reviewed By: sasukelover132 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: NarutoGirl^_^ On: April 16, 2007 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha Ha Ha it's me again!!! Awwwww....I like the new softer side of Zabuza ...it's kinda cute! O.O I can't wait to find out what happends in the next chapter!^_^ I really like this fan fic. its alsome!
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Reviewed By: NarutoGirl^-^ On: April 13, 2007 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL this sounds like its gonna be a good fan fic. it has lots of big words and just a little curseing in it ....but i like it please keep writeing its great! ^_^
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Reviewed By: NarutoGirl^-^ On: April 13, 2007 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL this sounds like its gonna be a good fan fic. it has lots of big words and just a little curseing in it ....but i like it please keep writeing its great! ^_^
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Title: Ok
Reviewed By: Koi13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 05:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was good so please keep going!
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