| "The Aftermath" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: xSakura On: September 12, 2008 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
[Just being realistic with the ratings. I don't give 10's, cuz there's always something to improve.] I simply L-O-V-E the fluff in here. Luv it. The creativity is extremely good, even though the one-shots are not exactly long. And good job on fixing a main storyline to link it all together. IchiRuki fer life. Kruzzah. You also did a very good job at copying the characters. I think Ichigo and Rukia worked out really well, but since you wrote Kon out of character, I can't really judge about him. PLEASE try to stretch this 'series' as long as possible. Don't rush the plot line, you got Rukia to 'dead center' around chapter eight. Try to fill this thing up without boring us. Why? Because we all love this. And we all love you. And in case you're still short on ideas, try giving the other Bleach characters a bigger role. I know this is supposed IchiRuki fluff, but Renji is always a good reason to argue. Byakuya and Kenpachi are pure bad news, but you can go there if you're looking for some drama. Inoue/Ishida/Chad can also be a big help. [I think I just wrote one of the longest reviews ever xD]
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Reviewed By: crimsoneli On: July 11, 2007 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i just wanted to let you know that i enoy your fanfic on bleaches ichigoxrukia. i find it extremely hilarious and enjoyable. keep up the good work! and when will the admit how they feel???
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Reviewed By: KawaiiAirheadzXD [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 16:37 CDT
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OMG!!! That little… well HUGE author's note was FUNNY!!! I was cracking up through out the whole thing ^^ One question though…is your brother just violent or abusive or something? Why does he keep hitting you with a baseball bat? I don't even think I've been hit in the head that many times…at least your still a great writer…just be sure to watch your head so you don't lose your talent. If anyone comes within five feet distance of your head, tell them to face me! I'm a year older than you, I can take them. I'll be your personal body guard…LOLZ J/K
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Reviewed By: KawaiiAirheadzXD [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 19:34 CDT
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Wow, great comeback! LOl! i was kinda wondering where you went! Hot damn, i wish i could try your grandmothers cookies! *drools* sounds YUMMIE!...now i'm hungry...
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Reviewed By: s.s. On: June 07, 2007 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your little one-shots. There aren't many good bleach fics posted on here and i have to say yours is one of the best. Update soon and keep it up! you are so innovative in your stories. I think oyu should do one about paint:) as if that's not wierd.
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Reviewed By: renagrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 13:14 CDT
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Great little shorts you're writing-- I especially like the latest one, which not only created a little fluff moment between I/R, but also showed that Ichigo's dad isn't all bad... As far as story ideas go, how about they go to some exotic restaurant (maybe from Rukia winning a bet?), the wait staff thinks they're on a date (which, of course, Ichigo swears it isn't) and Rukia asks lots of annoying questions about the food...Just an idea-- take it or leave it! Keep up the good work-- just watch your spelling/grammar a little more! ^__~
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Reviewed By: K. Kazama On: May 22, 2007 09:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi nice fic... a little spelling/grammatic errors here and there but still good enough... I like the way you somehow define their(Ichi,Ruki) somewhat complex relationship(with Rukia being Ichigo's closest friend bordering girlfriend)... I also appreciate the way you seem to have explain the said relationship and how you develop it... Anyhow regarding your request I have an idea that I'm just really too lazy to write here it is: Rukia asking about pills. Contraceptive pills. Play with it please. -k. kazama PS. I'm not frequenting this site so could you please alert me if you ever decided to write about what I suggested(e-mail: katsumi_04@yahoo.com)... I'm really interested with reading something alike .
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Reviewed By: KawaiiAirheadzXD [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 16:48 CDT
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OMG!OMG!OMG! U wrote the chapter already...and might i add that it turned out waaaay better than i expected! LOL! oh and things are finally starting to heat up!!! i could see the steam already blowing out of my computer!!! lol! Sorry, i'm really excited!
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Reviewed By: KawaiiAirheadzXD [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 16:40 CDT
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I'd have to say that my favorite chapter so far is the cheater one! that one had me cracking up from day to night! lol! oh and i have an idea for a story. but i'll e-mail u it so this review won't be 5 million words long! lol!
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Reviewed By: iSHiDaxBoyEEzxRxMinE [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 15:31 CDT
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Nice oninon chapter! LOL! ^^
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Reviewed By: BrolyFTMFW [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 10:17 CDT
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wow....If I were Ichigo I'd kill Rukia, but I'm not, oh well LOL!
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Title: LOL!
Reviewed By: PlatinumSabr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 22:19 CDT
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I'm just going to say this is freakin' hilarious! Please keep this up!! God it's funny!
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Reviewed By: KawaiiAirheadzXD [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 14:53 CDT
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This story was GREEEAT! lol! I wonder why no one has left a review yet! Oh well...AT LEAST I'M THE FIRST!!! Well loved the story!
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