| "The Arrangement" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: rainbowbrite1986 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this story since ff.net, and I was wondering if you intend to write an ending. Don't mess with my emotions! Please do the story justice and give it a proper ending!
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Reviewed By: Susan On: September 04, 2002 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter and what little conversation took place between them. Jackie Chan's my fave but dipping popcorn into root beer...well I don't know about that. I just noticed that I'm all caught up too *whimpers*, I want more so update when you can ok? You're a talented writer and I'm really enjoying your story ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 04, 2002 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! Veggie's line 'I demand an explanation" was rich! I guess he had gotten used to, and was enjoying, having sex with B-Chan. I also loved his reaction when Bulma had to teach him about human biology and her reaction when he told her how saiyajins "do it" ^_^. Great chapter. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 04, 2002 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Vegeta blasted her phone. Wish I could do that ^_^. Looks like he had a bad nights sleep too. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 04, 2002 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL-great line, "she could hear him was coming up the stairs as if he hated each one". Maybe Vegeta's mood has something to do with the fact that he may be feeling something for Bulma. Who knows, I have to read more. Great job!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 04, 2002 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd say Vegeta took it rather well ^_^. Can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 04, 2002 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chap. Fertility clinics are a good solution but Veggie is better. I like the "Save the Saiyans" thing you had goin there. Good job! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 04, 2002 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap. I like this Bulma alot! She wants motherhood and independence at the same time. Cool. Can't wait to see what she plans to do. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 04, 2002 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have wanted to read this for quite a while and all I can say is that this is the way I imagine their get together would've been like. Very good first chapter. |
Reviewed By: Lumen Lunae On: September 04, 2002 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
NEEEED MOOOOORE
*grin* better write something soon hehehehehe i love it) g'luck) |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2002 11:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
I had about given up on the update...keep going, this is good...oh yeah, you need to fix the story si it will show up when someone searches under DBZ. |
Reviewed By: Maxine [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2002 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, i love how Vegeta was all panicked at the end of the last chapter. hehehe ^__^ actually, i love the whole thing! i'll be waiting, as usual, for the next part!! |
Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2002 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is so original.. and exactly how I imagined it. ^_^ This is really an awesome story, PLEASE keep it up. The plot is so realistic to the show, I'm utterly impressed. Your writing skills are impeccable, and the touch of humor makes it all fun. ^_^
Since I'm lazy, I was wondering if I could just leave my request to be emailed about updates here.. my email's maxchick@mad.scientist.com..
Thankies! ^_-
~erie. |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2002 11:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
what only one review? well people are dumb! I really like the story.. :) I had to laugh about the sleeping and dreaming your falling thing.. guess that happens to everyone, I know it happens to me all the time *heh* |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2002 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this all last night but I forgot to update. Sheesh. K anyways I hope you update soon! See ya. |
