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Reviewed By: Kakashisgurly [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 18:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Few minor things on this. Make sure you have a disclaimer for the song AND the stories or you can be suspended. ALSO, even if you aren't good at summaries, try your best to make one and make sure there aren't any errors in it. Readers tend to judge what they are going to read by the summary and admitting you're not good at it/not putting one up/mispelling anything can make readers turned off. Good job though.
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I seriously loved that story!!! Please Keep Updating!!!!
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Title: PLEASE WRITE MORE FROM A MOODY REVIEWER
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 04:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To be perfictly honest I wasn't sure if I wanted to read this fic....Ya want to know why....for the simple reason that I had know Idea what it was going to be about...ya know there was not title and there was not summery....but now that I did take the time to accturly read it I think you should continue to write it It a good fic. I don't know how much you can believe me but it is and I would love to see more writen on it......I don't know what you have planed for the rest of the fic but a summery of the first chapter could be something like (Kagome, Sango,and Kagura are helping out Myoga cleans his temple when they get an unsuspecting suprize and disside to have alittle fun) I don't even know if that would be a good summary but at least its something am I right?....and I dont want to be a nag but its Im up realy late so this probably sounds realy mean...well just so you know the way I spelt Myoga is how its writen in the Manga I may not be the best speller in the world but I look it up when it comes to names...once again if that sounded realy bad but like I said It realy late for me and I acting a little moody...so sorry and plz update this fic I know I shouldn't be asking after I said that but I realy do like this fic and I realy do want to see you continue it I wan't to see Inuyashas face (read about his face) when they turn to them....hehe....Also I have a question is Kagome and inu Hanyou That is something else that could go in to a summary....I realy sure you would get more reviews if you at least had a summary or a title.....Ok I hoped modivate you to write more on this fic even though I'm a bad person who was just critsizing you and again I'm sorry plz don't hold it against me....any who please update...please and thankyou....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked you'r Fic it was great. hope to see more of you'r work on here.
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