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"Past Mind, Present Body" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ]
 Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 22, 2007 02:02 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story was so neat. Imagine Kagome finding someone with a similar attitude to Inuyasha and then Inuyasha actually turns up. I was sad that he gave his life to save Yash. I am glad they don't do it like that in real life. This story was very well written and I enjoyed reading it. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
 Reviewed By: Makala  On: August 30, 2007 18:57 CDT
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I just read this fanfic today so if you alredy did the sequeal let me know and if you haven't the I WANT IT!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 26, 2007 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey! Good story, but i think i should have read this BEFORE the sequel. Now i'm all confused, 'cause i'm TOTALLY inuXkag. And as Yash WASN'T inu's reincarnation ... I'm confused!!!(Hence the lower ratings... like if was TRULY inuXkag i'd be okay and you would have gotten a 10 on Enjoyment.... anyways...) The story was good though. Yep. Definetely good.
 Reviewed By: InuYashacrazy101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 25, 2007 20:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
i luv the stories u wrote think about being a publisher bahaaha really
 Reviewed By: InuYashacrazy101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 25, 2007 20:56 CDT
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i luv the stories u wrote think about being a publisher bahaaha really
 Title: XD
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 22, 2007 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved this story I couldn't stop reading it.....poor Inuyasha he loved Kagome so much but that wasn't him he shouldn't have even had those memmories of him....And want about Inuyasha's new family and his life he just though it away to die for the boy Kagome fell in love with...sigh but I didn't wan't Yash to die ether...sigh....I guess this is how people would feel about Kikyo if they did hate her so much....dang it I feel bad for her too...sigh....and kit him mean for some reason I think of Shippo I wander if it has anything to do with him being a orphan, and if she is suppose to be Shippo then why is she a she when Shippo it a he??...And another question does Kagome never visit Miroku, Sango, and Shippo any more I mean the are still her friends right....sigh......But none the less I loved this story and it only exsites me further to know that their is a sequel......MUST HAVE SEQUEL.....XD.....ok can't wait ......*peace*
 Reviewed By: inukagome4life  On: June 22, 2007 19:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
SQUEAL!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Marino  On: June 21, 2007 16:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! Happy story! You should totally make a sequel that could possibly incorporate other reincarnations -coughmirokucough- Sorry. But it was awesome still! Although... Inuyasha's past reminded me of Sakuya from Kaikan Phrase kinda... ^_^
 Reviewed By: Resilience [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 21, 2007 00:42 CDT
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i doubly that vote! really great and i love the perverted humor in this. fantastico!! *muah* does the weird ""it is a spicya meataballa!" thingy....
 Reviewed By: LostInSiberia_14 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 20, 2007 17:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story, so sad about Inu though! But I vote for a sequel!
 Title: THIS STORY OWNSSS!
Reviewed By: fishesrcool69 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 20, 2007 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
the end? :[ im sad now. this story was amazing and i loveddddd it!
 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 19, 2007 23:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really liked your story... very good... is it done? hope you update soon... please and thank you!
 Reviewed By: fishesrcool69 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 18, 2007 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. This is so cool! Really unexpected how Yash's like not the reincarnation of Inuyasha and all that and very depressing with all the shit that's happening with Inuyasha giving up his heart for Yash. You're a really talented writer and have a really great story line going here. I can't wait to read more. At first i really thought this would be another fic where it really is Inuyasha's reincarnation (the only reason I put nine instead of 10 on the originality part) and all that. You really turned it around and I really enjoyed that. This isn't the type of fanfic most people come up with, so feel special! :] Plus, so far, all I see are good reviews for your story.
 Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 18, 2007 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. I just finished reading what you have posted so far. Very good. And completely unexpected. A completely new take on everything. Your story is one of my new favorites! Please update soon!
 Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 18, 2007 10:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's getting better and better!! keep it going!
 Reviewed By: inuyasha-coolness [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 18, 2007 08:23 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
woah! this is the best f-ing story ever!!! i cant belive yash was a- well i cant give away the story!! this is great... and i like the fast pace... (^.^)
 Reviewed By: morePLZ  On: June 17, 2007 22:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
whoa...whoa WHOA....im lost as hell now!....omg i HOPE u dont make her choose!......hopefully there will be some weird thing hat the join bodies or smthn....oh PLZ let it b that!
 Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 16, 2007 00:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awww! Luv your story! I like the twist of Yasha being the 'copy', though Kagome doesn't throw it in his face.
 Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 15, 2007 01:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's really good!! the story is quite quick paced and you could describe the feelings and stuff more to create a some sort of atmosphere. you don't really need to fix anything though, if you don't want to. ^.^ *it was just a mild suggestion.* anyway, keep it going!!!!
 Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 14, 2007 03:07 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
awww... that is so sad yet cute at the same time i can't wait until you update again so i can find out what happens to our favorite Hanyou and Miko peace out *Inuluvher151*

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