| "Drift and Die and Come back to me" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2002 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
DragonBall 3 -- a grave.
Someone's trying to tell him something. *heh*
O.O What's he gonna run into next!?
Keep writing, I can't WAIT for him to wish her back!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: MysticIceDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. Keep going! ^-^ I wanna know what happens! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 28, 2002 12:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
yeah, i think susan's right about the soelling of kakarott. heh... oops... |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 28, 2002 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
in case no one told you in their review, kakkarot is the spelling i see people use most. i've also noticed that you often use the plural version of 'woman'(that being 'women'), when refering to only one woman.
wow! zombies, eh? that's different! cool! keep writing please, i like this story. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 28, 2002 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
On no, poor Veggie. Just when you think it's safe to go to a cemetery dead people start coming back to life. I just hope he can handle all of them. Btw, Goku's name is spelled Kakarott. So sorry that you hardly have any reviews, but I hope it doesn't stop you from writing this fic. It's really good ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2002 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for updating again! Hey look at it this way my story only has 2 reviews so guess it's a good thing that you have about 9 reviews now. But keep updating for my sake please! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 26, 2002 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love angst, and this story is coated in it. excellent chap. i can't believe he killed her!
you're so good at the inner turmoil that vegeta was going through. you described it really well.
i hope vegeta's plan works... |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 26, 2002 04:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, this is so sad. Poor Vegeta. Poor Bulma. Poor Me. I'm tearing and I actually had a pretty good day. I hope Veggie's plan works and that he killed her *gasp*. Then maybe the dragonballs will be able to bring her back. I just hope there's a happy ending (hint). Good story. |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2002 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew you put out another chapter. See I have a good memory. (Not really). This was the sad chapter eek. I hope you put the next chapter out soon for my sanity. Buh bye for now. |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2002 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow k I am remembering this from FF.net (God that site is annoying). I think you have the second chapter out on FF.Net too. It was really good by the way. K well I hope I'll be seeing the next chapter out soon! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 24, 2002 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! THAT WAS INCREDIBLE! just plain awesome! beautifully done! good song choice! i need to get that song now...
you are an incredible writer! i would REALLY like for you to finish this story, but that was probably obvious, eh? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 24, 2002 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you f*cking kidding me? That's so sad. My heart is breaking for Bulma. You can't leave it like this. She has to live cause I believe she's Veggie's salvation. I'll make a deal with you. When FFN goes back online I'll review there. Just don't stop writing this fic OK? |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2002 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinks* This is all happening so fast ... Vegeta beats up Bulma, Vegeta kills Bulma so maybe he can bring her back, he magically finds the radar hidden in her pocket, and he starts looking for the dragonballs.
DB1-Cookoo clock. O.O *cracks up* Veggieboy deserves some humiliation. ;)
DB2-Graveyard. Well, at least Vegeta's thinking about her. Dumas, why don't you stew over what you should put on HER tombstone!!! EEk!! Zombies!?!? *scratches head* now I'm confuggled ...
I've always believed that one thing that Vegeta and Bulma had in common was their bullheaded-ness(are they Taureans like me?) That, and they've both had a little spoiling; Veggie's the Prince of all (3!) Saiyins (at the time) and Bulma's the Princess of the Capsule empire! *lol* Sounds like a stupid fic ... reversed roles. heh.
I'm lovin the songs so far (curses spoiled artists/record companies for closing Audiogalaxy), but I don't have any suggestions yet. The songs you've picked so far have fit very well, so ... keep up the good work!
I miss your purple hair *blinks* Bulma dyes her hair?!(like Marge on theSimpsons:) For a second I almost doubted this song fit and thought it would better suit some Trunksie fic ...
*realizes this review is nearing 10pgs* And I only saw one teensy typo, so ... write more, pweeese!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: WeirdBluEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2002 18:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
You are a very evil person! EVIL I TELL U! MUST UPDATE SOON!
~ Lauren |
