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"Sango Dies" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: skittleispimp  On: October 13, 2007 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This one shot had me rolling... I thought it was really great. I mean yeah some of it was kinda blah and you did do alot of kissing and chest touching but hey! why not right?? It's your story. Well either way this fanfic gave my day some new light...
 Title: Sango's Death Review
Reviewed By: inu_luver17 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 05, 2007 06:57 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I gotta hand it to you, you have some writing skill. Very much, in fact. And I agree with you about Sango being really OOC in people fan fictions, but not in the anime. I really like Sango's character in the TV series, her being tormented by Naraku's controlling of her little brother. And Kelly Sheridan does deliver a damn good Sango. I do think you should have put more dialogue for Sango and less kissing other men in front of Inuyasha. That was mean, though he deserved it sometimes. All in all, very good fic.

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