| "Friend or Foe?" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Hmm...Not bad
Reviewed By: cratbro [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite good for a first... you really are good at understanding the human psyche. This, other than the Pokemon, could easily be a real situation. I have seen plenty already. Good Job!
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Reviewed By: unknown On: September 24, 2002 19:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
u made ash a total punk. what were u drunk? |
Reviewed By: "Skippy" On: June 28, 2002 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you update this very very very soon. I really want to read what happens next. I want to see Gary get his butt kicked all the way to the other side of the world. For his sake, he better be glad that Charizard didn't see what he was doing to Ash. I know that Charizard would not have liked that one bit, and probably would've used Dragon Rage or Flamethrower out of anger on Gary. I hope Gary gets caught with what he's doing. I really hope that Charizard catches him. It will be a good thing to see what Charizard would do when he sees his trainer getting beaten to a pulp, and on the verge of death each time. I had so much sympathy toward Ash, and I was so furious at what Gary did. I'm telling you that if he tried to do that to me, I'd knock his lights out. I would show him not to take advantage of me. I hope you feel the same way I do. Please email me and tell me what you thought when you wrote this. My email is KSR31183@aol.com. I would love to hear from you. Once again, please update as soon as you posslibly can. I want to see a major Gary butt kicking. You feel me? |
Reviewed By: Myst_Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2002 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, at least this is alot better than the other one "I love you" (your fanfic) It has more plot and characterization on this one. Overall, the story was good. |
