| "Crossing Paths" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: stary_night On: November 17, 2002 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i want to read more,more,more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: PRincessRobin On: November 14, 2002 08:37 CST
Comment/Review:
cute :) of course it always works that way, you stop looking for somone and they find you...lol
anywys, keep it up and update soon
Robin |
Reviewed By: Novasenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2002 13:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
(slowly pulls out my Ken no Uchu and twists it around slowly) Hm Kisei-chan...hehe! You know I know there is more to this story right? You told me about when we were leaving the park a long time ago. (stops twisting katana around and stares at Kisei) and I know you're gonna write more right? (Holds katana to her neck with evil glare in eyes) RIGHT?
Sephiroth: I just came out of Rin's body because she wanted to tell you something. She said (pulls out paper) That your s-story it (no wait it's is) yea um...is very good and she wants you to write more asap. If you don't she will take her katana and hunt you down. (Rin's sceam is heard in the background) Um...I guess she isn't gonna hunt you down now. (Sees Kisei holding a giant fan on top of a K.O. Rin) |
Reviewed By: PrincessRobin On: August 22, 2002 08:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
So close but yet so far!!!!! lol it just goes to show that speed eating gets you no where in life. |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 20:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dark Princess: NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! MUST READ MORE! *chants*mustreadmoremustreadmoremustreadmore*continues to chant till Misai comes over and decks her*
Misai: SHUT UP IM TRYING TO WATCH TV *Misai then returns to the recliner to watch TV*
Dark Princess:*dizzies in eyes* ok i shut up-ugh*falles over*
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 20:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dark Princess: NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! MUST READ MORE! *chants*mustreadmoremustreadmoremustreadmore*continues to chant till Misai comes over and decks her*
Misai: SHUT UP IM TRYING TO WATCH TV *Misai then returns to the recliner to watch TV*
Dark | Reviewed By: animej [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2002 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::Wimper::: ::wimper:: You can't end there!!!!!!! Could you write more??? this is a great story!!!!!!! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Satsuki (meisatsuki13@yahoo.com) On: July 08, 2002 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chronicle has a magnificent plot. I find irresistible the proposal of starting them off as children. It was rather cute. Please indulge my pleasures by continuing the majestic narrative.
Your Waiting Reader,
Satsuki |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2002 16:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh poor Duo-chan :'( hes looking for Makoto-chan and he didnt even recignize her...oh well :P
PLZ update asap,
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: Lady Foeseeker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 19:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
^_^ great ficcy!!!!! I can't wait for more! I liek oyur idea, very original. Later! |
