| "A Latent Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: duck113 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting take on the story!
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Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai_ On: May 16, 2008 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so a member! For some reason the site stopped recognizing this Snowbird. Anyway. I am really enjoying this new twist on the original anime. I wondered how you would bring him and Rin together in this plotline. Since the future Sesshoumaru could not remember the incident of being a child with them must mean that the new past taking place is being held back from effecting the future timeline until the completion of the new events taking place in the past. If Shippo does not end up with her, then how does he meet Rin? Unless his father somehow still dies. The loss of that one shard is now going to start a domino effect. I'm eager to hear how and to whom he lost it to. I'm even more eager to read their first meeting with the now adult Sesshoumaru in the past and his reaction to them. It would be cute if she without thinking gave him a hug like she did the future Sesshoumaru. haha I could just see his eyes enlarged in shock.
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Reviewed By: felipa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 18:39 CDT
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GREAT CHAPTER! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holly crap! Inuyasha lost the shard???? BAD INU! Or maybe he used it... hmm... anyway Sessh didn't meet Rin right after he lost his arm, he met her after he got hit with Kaze no Kizu... I think that was when he used the dragon claw to try to break Tetsusaiga... yeah anyway, after the battle at in Inu no Taisho's tomb for Tetsusaiga where he lost his arm, we later find out that he went near that village where that woman who played the flute fell in love with him. I think it is reasonable that he would have skipped that trip seeing how it was under his own power, whereas the trip near Rin's village was under the power of Tenseiga the first time around, so it stands to reason that the curse would transport him to the same place that the sword did... by the way, where is Tenseiga now in this story? wasn't it too big for Sesshoumaru to carry around and someone else was holding it for him? I don't remember. If so, I'm sure he'll want that back.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 18:31 CDT
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glad to see you're back!! uh oh, inuyasha's in trouble now! lol. i wonder who took the shard? hm...naraku, kouga, sango, miroku, shippou, thunder brothers? hm... FL
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Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, when are you going to update? You left the last chapter at a heartwrenching cliffie. I am thoroughly enjoying this different plot twist. It's new and refreshing. Kagome is rather funny at times with how she reacts and thinks whenever things don't occur like they did the first time around. As for Sesshoumaru, I don't think he's dead, just back to being an adult somewhere. I hope these memories stay with him. Otherwise what was the use of his grandmother's spell. I'm excited at their next meeting, to see his reactions to them. Now, about Shippo. Somehow he and Rin have to get together which doesn't exactly have to happen to them as children. Kagome could arrange their meeting when they're older. She did make him a promise. I look forward to seeing what changes you plan to make as to their meeting up with Sango and Miroku. Oh yes, we can't forget Kouga either. And since Urasue's dead, no Kikyo, unless you plan to have someone else (like Naraku) to resurrect her. This second time around opens up so many possibilities for all the characters. I can't wait to see what your imagination has in store for them. So please - update!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 07:04 CDT
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this is a very interesting story! somehow i think that with the way you have the past/future tangled up that kagome will actually end up with her own future, but hopefully it will be a better one where human and youkai live together peacefully and it wont be so polluted. i cant wait to find out if kagome ends up jumping down the well again to reset the past and try again.
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Reviewed By: snowbird-youkai On: March 30, 2008 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why did you have to be so mean and end it at such a heartstopping cliffie? I've been waiting almost 2 months for the update! Please, update! I wonder if his grandmother's spell as a child is over, meaning his lesson has been learned. Unless it was pushed under layers of ice because of the confusion it would create in the mind of an adult Sesshoumaru.
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Reviewed By: Soleil Chev [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 16:24 CDT
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Great story. So write more and update this! Killing Sesshomaru is not cool!
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 19:10 CST
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ur darn right you better be running away!!!! *chases around* oh u better update quickly before i find you and MAKE you update!! FL
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 21:36 CST
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*squeal!* Oh now you've done it. You've drawn me in. I'm sitting here on the edge of my seat pounding the desktop and saying, "no no no! This can't be it!" (big grin) I LOVE suspense. Your vision of Sesshoumaru as a short person is very believable. I await the next installment as patiently as I can. :)But I have to warn you... I'm hooked. :D
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Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 00:46 CST
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(sends heated glare at author)........why oh why would you leave it there?...the suspense is gonna kill me.......please PLEASE dont take to long with the next chapter......this is just sooo good
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-faints- sessh- wat is with females? tba- u died!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! .. i think... ~sessh- wat?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~tba-shakes head- u didnt read the story did u.? ~sessh- pouts- i dont like to read. ~tba- that explains soooooooo much u know. ~sessh- gives her a glare- ~tba- that never works. remember im The Black Angel ~sessh- wat ever. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: Bookreader9999 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story with well thought out plot (even with the 'cruel' cliffhanger!!!). Can't wait for your next update.
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 07:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! Evil cliffie! O_O I'm fairly sure you're not killing him off, so I assume that either Tenseiga transported him somewhere safe, or he got transported back to where he was turned small and has grown up again. Either way, I'm on needles waiting for you to update again. Out of the four fics I'm reading at the moment, I look forward to these updates the most. I really hope your Inuyasha muse gets its act together and supply you with inspiration again soon.
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