| "Her Name" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: icefyre1222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 07:32 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you've really hit something with this idea =) I love how the story is progressing, and I hope you update soon! I will be following your updates!
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Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this story is so awesome. i think it would be hard for me to write a story like this. i wouldn't know how one would feel after an accident that they don't remember and not remember anything about their life. some things i think how does she know what they are. like when she said i hate you. it made me think how does she know what hate is. just saying. it really is a cool story. i like how it's written and the plot. keep up the good work. you're really talented. update soon. later.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 20:26 CST
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methinks my brain just exploded. . . did i already tell you that your writing is amazing? well it is. . . i guess that if you forget the stuff that makes you like or dislike something... my daughter liked radishes because the fraggles liked them in 'fraggle rock'... so if she forgot that connection and her acquired taste for radishes, she would no longer like them. . . amnesia sounds to me like a dissociative identity disorder but instead of sharing identities in one body the original identity is lost. (see, my brain exploded) . . . i love it, you motivate me to think! my family and friends will be totally displeased, VERY DANGEROUS. ~ a true pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 12:22 CST
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*setting up the board* ... grr borrowed laptop, i hit the mouse pad instead of the space bar... must proofread reviews before i post them... ~ apologies, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 12:16 CST
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ahh! more mystery! i guess you're still setting up the, placing the pieces. your writing is mesmerizing. . . update as often as you like, i shorter wait between chapters but whatever is easier for you would be best. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 04:55 CST
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It's an excellently written story. I understand why you want constructive criticism for it, but for now, let me exalt over this masterpiece. XD 'kay... done exalting. Mmmm... to improve, you can... gosh, I love your writing style! I can't imagine any improvements to it, sorry. Ah well... maybe in the next chapter, I'll find some flaw. Till then ~~ Totally Kawaii
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Reviewed By: inu_luver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this story extremely enjoyable. But there's one thing that I think you got wrong. It's Kagome's friend's names. You had the first two right (Eri and Ayumi), but the last one Minie, was supposed to be Yuka. I don't know if you did this on purpose, or what, but I'm just pointing out a fact. Please update soon and do your best!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 05:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A magnificent start to what could be a wonderful story. The style of writing is captivating and elegant. I hope that you make a nice long story and that you update often. I will be waiting to read it.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 17:13 CST
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wow... what a way to draw a person in and hold them in a death grip! . . . alright, you wanted it. when referring to a person you should use 'who' and not 'that' "Then the woman that is my alleged mother yells at him (a pet peeve i have) and mixing tenses. other than that it is quite a story. i do have a thing for the motorcycle leathers on yasha and am curious how she has a connection with him. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 16:45 CST
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i want to read the story you deleted. i would give constructive criticisms and suggestions. . . i shall now read this story.
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Reviewed By: bbelele On: November 18, 2007 06:59 CST
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Yupp, I think the same as LadyCash :) Great first chapter.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 00:34 CST
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Very nice start! I am impressed. The tone, the 'feel' of this is superb. Cannot wait to find out just what it is K has forgotten, and how 'he' ties into it.
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