"Riku's Reunion" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Agreed On: February 06, 2009 10:47 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I agree, this should be made into a multi-chaptered story. Also, the entire ending, it seemed pretty rushed to me. But overall I liked it. Though, it's not quite an original idea.
| Reviewed By: narutofan1091 On: March 26, 2008 01:15 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Thats it???? A one-shot like this should be a story, I mean theirs all these questions left behind, Is Riku ever going to see Sora and Kairi again? where is Sephiroth takeing Riku? How did Sephiroth find out that Riku was really his Son? I think you can make this one shot into a story really easily. And besides I always wanted to read a good story about Riku and Sephiroth as Father and Son.
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