| "Lost in the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: SaiyanBeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! *screams* This is one of the best stories I've read in this genre. Its a nice change from human being enslaved and I love the way the story unfolds. Its got that whole building, then climax and then resolution type thing. But there's a part two yay! Cause I'm exciting to see how their lives are now that the kids are born. ^_^ This was an awesome story and I can't say anything bad about, maybe a few grammar mistakes like the letters got mixed a little but I can't really complain cause it didn't bother me as I read. This was one HFIL of a story. Well I'm off to read the seqeul ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2002 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-sniffles- Wow, that was a kick butt story. One of the best I've read in awhile. Very original plot and style. -bows- I love this story to death. Onto the sequel! |
Reviewed By: GohanSj3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2002 16:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW! u did it, u did it, u did it! ^_^ u finished lost in the darkness!!! YEAH Let's Party. i loved the way that this is going so have to hurry up with shades of darkness, i'll be waiting.. way 2 go!!!!! I'm so HAppy! *grinning from ear to ear* ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Yuki KIKI [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2002 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is a really original idea you've got going on, and it's very well written and thought out. Great fic, can't wait to see more ^^ (in other words: Update soon or I *will* come after you! O.o! Jus kidding ^^) |
Reviewed By: Gohan sj3 On: August 24, 2002 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god, that was the saddest thing i've ever read in my entire life. i cried like 10 times, seriously. you have to finish it soon, i have 2 c how it ends i mean come on talk about letting it hang there. gggggrrrrrr plz finish it soon!!! |
Reviewed By: rara24 On: July 31, 2002 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
perfect!
more! |
Reviewed By: samantha On: July 11, 2002 17:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good idea, making humans the masters instead of the usual slavery-type stories. Cuz humans can be just as good or evil as any other species, and we have tons of brain-related potential, so if our not-so-nice section decided to use their brains as their primary weapons, other races would be totally screwed over. |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 15:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
damn sounds like out slave times. shit, damn. i like this fic and its cool how you can show both side of slavery. oh and ch9 and 8 are the same you might want to fix that
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: LiLxReN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2002 21:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
hehe i reread this and its styll great!! heheh just wanted to drop a review, and say wussup! ^__^ great story, and ur a great writer, but of corse u already know that!
ja'ne
renchan |
Reviewed By: Silenced [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 20:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
EEEEEEEEEEEEE write more, its to good to leave me hanging like this |
Reviewed By: Majin Cosmo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 22:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
*is absolutely dying to find out what happens and how this will tie in to everything* Great chapter, but I'm dying to know, will my fav character Bulma show up somewhere? Pwetty Pwease? Anyway, great chapter, again~ Majin Cosmo |
Reviewed By: Majin Cosmo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chappie! You rock! Keep em' coming! ~ Majin Cosmo p.s. I'm honored that a great writer like you read my fic :) |
Reviewed By: Majin Cosmo On: June 28, 2002 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definately well done! Very original, and nicely written. I only hope that you show some humans that are kind to the Saiyans...perhaps the briefs, or someone? *can't wait until they grow up and some romance possibly starts* Well, even if there isn't any romance, it's still an intriguing story. Would love to see how all the human DBZ peoples tie in. Also was wondering what time period they're in. Like, they have lots of technology, but they still have slaves working thier fields. Couldn't machinery do the job faster? Or are they just supposed to be really cruel? Oh well, I'm sure all will be explained in time. Thanks for writing such a great story! |
