| "What Will Never Be" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: FloralBlackMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2002 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good story! I can't wait for Ch.6!! |
Reviewed By: Raven Star [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 04:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is great!! You should continue with it. But you went straight to Pan and Trunks sparring and Marron officially now being Trunks girlfriend, and you didn't show what made Pan decide not to kill herself... *pouts* |
Reviewed By: Storm On: July 02, 2002 01:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting story line. It's kinda like a love triangle. Err... a love triange with 2 sides? I know a love triangle where one side has fallen! I'm not making any sence am I... |
