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| "UNCLENCHED" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: Simply sweet
Reviewed By: ScreamerKiss On: October 05, 2008 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't describe all the feelings I felt as I read through this. Sadness, happiness, loneliness, anger, its just to much and mere words alone cannot describe these emotions. You wrote this story beautiful and not only skillfully grabbed your readers attention but grabbed there soul and told them a story. I must admit I cried in this, and its very hard to make me do that. Another thing to be proud of. Also, you are the first person I've ever felt the need to review. As soon as I finished this I had the strongest need to show you my gratitude. God, its hard really. I've never been very good with words and I certainly cant tell you the feelings that plagued me as I read this. It's almost as if I was Sesshomaru himself standing on that sandy beach and watching as the sun went down. Well anyways, all I can really say is…Thank you. P.S. gosh I feel like such a dumble dork after righting that but oh well XP
| Reviewed By: Kanna Mizuo Megami On: July 31, 2008 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I simply cannot believe that a story this well written and this amazing can only have gotten 3 reviews. I will admit I don't like to review to any story unless they make me feel something and if I truly believe that the author is disserving of the review. Because of my high standards I also don't like to leave simple reviews. (I am by no means giving you negative criticism but I will let you know what I thought of this story.) I noticed several things in this story that were either unclear or confusing. You did not specify what time they were in, what happened to Inuyasha, why Sesshomaru was in modern day clothes or what was killing Kagome. But I must add that none of this was needed or would have been relevant in this story. These are all facts and information that would have made no difference to the plot because the entire story was to be feelings. I may be wrong but to me this story was only suppose to make you feel; feel happy, sad, longing, love, and true heart. The way you wrote the story was different but well thought out. Each point made well and in such a way that it was still understood that it was all about the same time and day. All that aside, I'd like to say that it was amazing… The story made me cry, made me long to understand and see things as Sesshomaru saw them. I wanted so much for him to do or say something but at the same time I wanted him to not say a thing. For an amazing story and for a good cry, you have my thanks. I will continue to check and see if you ever upload another story. Look forward to my long and rambling reviews. Until then… Kanna
| Reviewed By: ? On: June 23, 2008 03:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so beautiful. It made me cry. Excellent job!
| Reviewed By: flynalien On: April 30, 2008 06:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Simply lovely!
| Reviewed By: Naiya Toshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so beautiful. It made me cry.
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