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| "It Takes Two" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Niina On: June 01, 2011 14:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
Oh thank you for writing this pairing! They are my OTP, but it's difficult to find a fic with them both in character... oh, well as in character as young Kakashi was, for he had changed. Anyway, thanks! | Reviewed By: Jared342 On: October 29, 2008 20:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm ... what to say ... what to say ... lol, what other than to say than, AWESOME in this case? Hehe, I enjoyed the great blend of comedical sense and sexual content, of which was sucessful in gaining the utmost attention of myself. The idea of going into such a highly detailed script of the scenery had me readin' this multiple times [which'll I'll probably continue to do o.o]. I usually don't have a big interest in fanfics, but this one had me goin'. And I agree with Verna, you do realize that that last phrase does invite pleas' for more, right? XD ... anyways hope to see more from ya, and great job [ and while you're at it, why not make a second part? The last bit had me hangin' - which I hate to admit but ... you got me, lol. lol, just a suggestion tho, so don't take it literally, if ya know what I mean].
| Reviewed By: devilsdealer On: September 02, 2008 20:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just had to write a review because it's rare that I read a Yonkaka fic that makes me smile this much. There was no tragedy, just good sex and perfect comedic timing. Nice inclusion of The Pervy Sage! Thanks for writing some wonderful fluff for these two who so rarely get it!
| Reviewed By: VernaJast On: March 11, 2008 12:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(thought I'd add my review here, as well) "…You have another idea, don't you?" Minato dared to ask. Kakashi's grin was captivating in the most sinful of ways. "You'll like this one." You realize leaving us hanging like that is inviting pleas for MORE! :D Ah, I shouldn't have read this at work! *giggle* Now I just want to go draw Kashi clones and desk sex, ha! Aside from the well-written smut, I particularly liked the part when Tsunade knew they were clones and then punched the Jiraiya clone, hehe. That struck me as both hilarious and perfectly in character…for all four of them. Great writing, great luvin'! [p.s., Wanted to add that the only problem I saw, which is actually just personal preference, is the use of "deepened the kiss". I usually walk away from a fic, no matter how good it is, when I run across that phrase.]
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