| "Secret Feelings" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: the thrid reader!
Reviewed By: synthesizedtwitchy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
as you can see I do not average my ratings...and wow it must of hurt you to type how trig was evil...we know that you truly love it and all other torturous labourus forms of math!!!! but yes, your story is getting better on the enjoyment part but I'm still abit worried *pokes the blobfic* I hopes it solidifies soon or I might drown...but you said there would be twists!! I love twists so make them come soon!! And if they are twisty enough to make haley burn your house down then I definately look forward to them!!!And who could it be...I bet it's a NIIINJA!
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Reviewed By: synthesizedtwitchy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 23:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
{It cut off like half of my review T-T} but your start is kind of blobish {my fanfic term, means is sorta cliche and can be used for about any non set story line} which is not nesicarily a bad thing but it can be a bit boring...so yeah, but continue to write and surprise us mmk? ~huggles and war your twitchykens >.
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Title: An honest friends review!!!
Reviewed By: synthesizedtwitchy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Googly goodness this is quite short!!>.< ramble a teensy bit more pleasessssss :D anyway now to the actual review! {And I'm not dorky!!but marching band is awesome...and yes you will get carpal tunnel so I should stop bringing G.H. to your house to protect you!!!>.
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Reviewed By: Halex969 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KAG OM! Haha sorry first word of your story is cut into two pieces. Anyways I finally was able to get the gay computer on this site so I could read your stroy! BRAVO!! Yaya brookie I loves it still just as much but damn you cliff hangers!! What did she see!!! Everytime I see your bubbly face I get a feeling in a very silly place.
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Title: Uh....................................
Reviewed By: Princess Stormcloud0217 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need a more original plot. I have read,like, 50 fanfics like this. Your problem is in the plot. You R a realy good writer. Continue this story, but add a twist that doesn't include Inuyasha imediatly saying "I love you".That is so unoriginal. Turn this into something worth remembering! By the way, most people won't read a fic without a romance between Inuyasha and Kagome. You also need to include a summary of your story that won't give away the ending.The summary needs to be the actual plot of the story written in words that grab a reader's atention. You can pull it off! You are a wonderful,stopindious writer! I BELIEVE IN YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! much love, Princess Stormcloud
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: Halex969 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay Tora I loves it and if you ever update I shall read this and love it even more. U better not give up because u think that you write bad....-_-
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