| "Unity" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Shalimar23 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 07:31 CST
Comment/Review:
please please write more soon cuz i love how this story is going so far. I really want to know what happens. Do the outers let Hotaru stay at the school? why are those guys following them at the art place? PLEASE PLEASE write more soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Gryemalkin On: August 06, 2002 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done, I like the way you are including different factions and points of view, I really look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Myst_Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work. Can't to see the next update.~___~
Take care. |
