| "Spring Fever" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Sango-san On: July 06, 2008 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG NO!! The suspense is killing me! Please continue! I want them to mate!
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Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i don't hate you. really, i don't. i'm just sad. really sad. even though i know it continues, i'm sad it's over. it was such a great story. i need you to start that story really soon. i feel like i do when it's the end of a season of Degrassi or South of Nowhere. you might not know those shows, but if you do you see how serious i am about this. i loved this story so much. please, please, PLEASE update the next one really, really soon. sorry to bother you. i can't wait to see what happens. aw, Sesshomaru's in LOVE.
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Reviewed By: handypup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow! i love it, i can't wait to start reading the next part. You write sesshoumaru so well, and i like how you filled in little plot holes with your own stuff, it's very exciting!
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 21:13 CDT
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Heh, okay. I'm assuming you had this story already written and are just posting it all at once...because if that isn't the case...daaaamn. I think the ominous music has been cued, hm? Whatever happened to the o-shiro is yet to come, and considering Bashamon's greeting of them in the present, Sesshomaru hasn't changed anything yet. I hope he hasn't completely forgotten about that. I also hope you have more of this written and ready to go, because I'm totally hooked. ^_^ Cheers!
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Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 04:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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when i saw how much you updated i thought to myself, "What?! how could you hold back on me like that? i'm hurt." you DO realize this would have helped with my addiction to your story, don't you? whatever. i'm satisfied. i ended up staying up til 2 in the morning reading them all. now i'm not mad at you anymore. well, i wasn't really before just shocked. so i can't wait for the next update. please let it be soon. like tomorrow, maybe? this story is so awesome!
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 19:19 CDT
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You said you wanted feedback, so I'll tell you right off the bat that I usually completely skip over stories whose summaries begin with any version of "What happens when." The only reason I didn't skip your story is because I got to the part about no werewolves or demon transformations and was curious. I'm still a little disappointed that no explanation was forthcoming--sure, he bit her, but what about that caused the fever? I just finished chapter 10 and was just getting a hint of what the heck was going on. That said, the intervening chapters did give an interesting take on Sesshomaru...upholding an image takes a lot of work, doesn't it? It's entertaining to see him be able to let go of that. I also like seeing a Sess/Kag fic in which she retains her usual personality...it seems like a lot of authors make her pretty much perfect and it makes her a little boring. I hope you keep going with this, if only for the selfish reasons that I want to know how Sesshy got to the future in the first place and why the well stopped working. Cheers!
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Title: so funny
Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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AWESOME!!! i couldn't stop laughing. this is so great. i'm sad that was all there was. i want more to read. why? why does the world like to torture me like this? this is so very well written. i absolutely love how you made Sesshomaru in this. and how mad it makes Kagome. and how Sesshomaru takes pleasure in her misery. it's just all so great. it was really hilarious when the three friends showed up. i need you to update really soon. like tomorrow. it was so great! i love this! can't wait for the next update.
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: Kasheka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 05:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more i beg of u
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Reviewed By: handypup [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's good, i really like the POV. You capture Sesshoumaru's snarky personality very well. A couple typos here and there, but well written none the less
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Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. i love this. well, i love Sesshomaru so that must be a big factor. you write really well and creatively. i wish i could do that. keep it up. can't wait until your next update. hope it's soon.
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 05:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i rated this fic beacause it is good and interesting to read and the writing and plot of it is awsome so please write more
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