"I Loved Him First" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 16:33 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Nice. Kaggie always makes me laugh with the one-liners. Keep writing! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 00:48 CDT Comment/Review: Okay loved the part about the demon hamsters! haha that made me laugh!also I would love to see Kagome and InuYasha as little kids. They would be sooooo cute :D. Well awesome job on the latest chapter! cant wait to read the next one ^_^
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Title: funny please continue and please please make kikyio da bitch not kagome i'm begging crys please Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 17:22 CDT Comment/Review: continue
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 00:53 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like this story so far! its so cute :D I cant wait to read more but I am not a big InuYasha Kikyo fan but even if it ends up like that ill still read and review :D cant wait to read the next chap ^_^
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 23:41 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: LOL! Yash is hilarious! And I managed to see part of Saw III..I'm still trying to catch the whole thing on Stars or something. Loved the chapter! Update again when you can :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 05:51 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: that was a cool first chap i really like the plot so far. hope to see another chap!!!!
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Title: yay bravo this is awsome Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 22:51 CDT Comment/Review: athough i hate ayame that bitch grrr koga is eather mine or kagome's no one elses lol i'm crazy i live in a phsysco word lol 0.o i'm just kiding! lol i'm just being silly hahahhaahhahahahahahahaha!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 22:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: They're making a FIFTH saw? Shweet! Unfortunately I haven't seen the third...which in turn made me not wanna see the fourth and so on so forth until I get off my lazy behind and rent it. ANYWAY, great first chapter. Kagome was very Juno-esque and dished out some pretty cool one liners. Can't wait for the second chap. Till then! ~Amber
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