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"Serendipity" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ]
 Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 05, 2009 02:29 CST
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so cute
 Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 10, 2008 22:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just re read this again. It really is a WONDERFUL little fic.
 Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 22, 2008 23:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was a good story
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 20, 2008 12:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is just incredibly beautiful! I was drawn in immediately by the way you laid it out. I am amazed and enchanted by how full a story it is told in such a manner. It can be very tricky in a one-shot to show a slow progression of a relationship, but you did it perfectly. I was intrigued that Inuyasha just left the group, and couldn't help but wonder where he went and why, but if fit the story so well. I also wonder why she suddenly vanished "back to the future" after so much time had passed. I am delighted to have sparked any thoughts or love for Hiei/Kagome. ^_~ And I hope you DO go ahead and write a companion piece to this from Kagome's pov. This one is a masterpiece! ^_^
 Reviewed By: hellfire95X [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 19, 2008 20:04 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ah that was so cute. Hiei and Kagome are the best together that's for sure.I hope you write more stories about them.
 Reviewed By: Hieis_koi14 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 17, 2008 16:02 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
that was the cutest, sweetest, most well written thing i've read in monthes! i usually hate first person point of views, but you make me love them!
 Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 15, 2008 21:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
I particularly liked the cadence in the beginning. "When I first saw her, this, this, this, and this... I was totally wrong." "when I first met her..."
 Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 07, 2008 22:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
I definitely liked it.
 Reviewed By: Saholia [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 29, 2008 20:25 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love it! I hope you decide to write more Hiei/Kag one-shots....
 Reviewed By: touketsumizu [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 21, 2008 00:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow, that's a great story you wrote. hell yeah they belong together! heheheh. is there going to be a sequel to this???
 Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 20, 2008 22:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Loved it. I honestly think this has great potential to be a good story. Great job.

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