| "Night Thoughts" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: keilani On: July 24, 2005 15:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
it was really good.i felt like crying.it delt with so many issues.i liked the end when haruka thinks "girls aren't supposed to chase after other girls"
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Reviewed By: obsidian [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 23:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this fic. It was so simple but dealt with so many issues at hand. I think the most powerful line in the entire story is the last one, where Michiru thinks to herself "Girls aren't supposed to chase after other girls." That line just grabbed me and made your story that much more effective. You did a wonderful job with this story. |
