| "La Red Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Jimbobob5536 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2010 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting story so far. One of the better takes on a Ranma-chan story I've seen in a while. Looking forward to the first shikima encounter. That will be rather interesting. I also follow your FF.Net account, it's actually how I found out about this. Keep up the good work!
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Title: welcome to MMO
Reviewed By: avis de rapina [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2010 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, so this is where you decided to post this story. To tell the truth, I got so tired of all the anti-Ranma-chan rants in the replies to your preview on TFF that I just skipped over most of the other replies to get to your updates. I'm definitely looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: Cat on a Shtick [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2010 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One point off on originality because I believe I've seen at least one other x-over between these series. However in La Blue Ranma I do beleive Ranma is the Shikima. Otherwise quite perfect. I applaud your editing, or your editors editing skills, long chapters and non-english words must be a killer. Plot with the porn?! ZOMG that's unthinkable! Sorry bout that. Plot is never a bad thing unless you are dealing with a lame author who pushes it into your face. Porn with plot aint a bad thing. I think this is of a case of plot with porn though. Wither you post here or FF.net I will continue to follow you like a lost puppy. Love your works man, top noch, this included.
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Reviewed By: Clouddancer1014 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2010 17:25 CST
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---Just a thought . . . I've looked at some of the other reviews, and I can agree with some of them to a point. However, most of the male ninjas dealt with the lesser shikima . . . so they trained for a large part of their lives to fight Shikima that might as well be level 1 enemies? So what happens when they have to deal with higher levels . . . and just what level is an Overfiend at? If you think about it, male martial artists may only have the ability to deal with weaklings, while female sexcraft ninjas take on the big bosses. That may answer a few of these other questions . . . Also, this IS your story. Who is to say that it isn't slightly AU?
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Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2010 11:21 CST
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"High mastery of one all but assures success of the other…though I dare say that you are the first person to be able to avail yourself of the opportunity to practice both." This statement is a contradiction or a blatant lie on the part of Nodoka. If Ranma is to be the first able to practice both sides, male and female, then the first part of Nodoka's statement has no basis. And just how would Ranma's engaging in sexual activities with one of the girls pursuing him cause unnecessary 'confusion' for Ranma?
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Reviewed By: redclose1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2010 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
apart from Hell is a Martial Artist I think this is your best fic yet
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Title: INTERESTING
Reviewed By: Shadow2040ad [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2010 08:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cant Wait for your next chapter
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Reviewed By: Rowinr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2010 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start i have seen a few fics with this cross but they end right at the first chapter and then they are abandoned i look forward to see if you bet that habit I do have to say the plot so far is interesting and i look forward to chapter 2
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Reviewed By: Clouddancer1014 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2010 19:14 CST
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---You're the same Ozzallos from FF.Net, right? I can't believe someone actually wrote a cross like this and managed to stay true to who Ranma is . . . I mean, this is extreme, even for most lemons . . . Still, it is interesting; keep writing this, and if you are the same Ozzallos from FF.Net, could you please continue with Oiran Ranma soon? I found that quite interesting, and I would like to see more. Happy writing, and update soon!
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