| "The Proposal" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: defectus On: June 05, 2012 15:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess you probably aren't going to finish this story, but it was really funny and in character, so I just wanted to let you know. I really liked it, well what you had of it. You sounded like you had other parts of it planned out... so here's to hoping that you maybe wrote them and didn't post them? |
Reviewed By: mae_may On: March 21, 2010 23:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAH!!! THAT"S HILARIOUS HOW SHIPPO TRICKED INU! ^_^ I admit that I would have fallen for his mischieviousness. Then I'll be really irritated and furious because of this humiliation-so I can sympatize with Inu here. Anyway,I think your plot is going in a brilliant direction... so I hope you'll continue w/ The Proposal -- and writing in general. ^_^ And if you get attack by the plot bunnies again... don't forget to set up a trap for them!
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Reviewed By: mae_may On: March 02, 2010 21:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent Intro! ^_^ I hope you'll continue this story! I've always wondered what could happen between Inuyasha and Kagome got married soon after she returned. I like how you use the original aspects of each character in your own way! Will Inu and Kag have kids too? ^_~ Hope you'll keep up with your passion for writing!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2010 01:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha, very cute beginning, and I'm really glad this isn't a one-shot. It reads like it could be, although naturally, it'd be one of those one-shots that always leave you wanting more. So it looks like we will actually be getting that more. Goodie goodie! I can't wait! :-)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2010 01:19 EST
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laughed just as heartily the second time around. nice of you to move it here, but since i already read it-- i knew it sounded familiar and with a little investigation i have discovered your alias!! =p i still think you should add one with his brother, one would believe sesshoumaru would find that extremely amusing LOL ♥
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