| "The Midnight run-in" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Rin200* On: March 09, 2011 20:23 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In the next chapter, i think you should have kikyo come in (very jealous, of course) and beat up Kagome really bad and inuyasha never sees kikyo ever again!!! I also think you should have miroku come in! these are just some very stupid ideas I came up with that I thought you might like for your next chappie... I LUV THIS FANFIC!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: xxxInukagxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2010 16:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed the first 10 chapters, and i hope you finish the story.
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Reviewed By: Angle of Darkness On: June 28, 2010 22:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how u had all the cliffes. This is a fun fanfic to read because it always has you on ur toes. I want to know who is at the door. Plz finish this fast. I love it.
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Reviewed By: mae_may On: March 17, 2010 22:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! It's Me Again ^_~! Anyway great continuation thus far... so Inu and Kag ends living together w/ Sango n Ayame next door! Hmmms.. will Miroku, Kouga, and Houjo be on thier side as well? Wat about other the characters.. like Sesshomaru, Rin, Kohaku, Shippo n Naruku? haha.. maybe u can interwine thier personalities in ur story! O_o nyway... Im sorry if you don't like my suggestions... but I hope you'll still continue with your story! ^_^
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2010 04:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
please continue i liked it a lot:) keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: mae_may On: March 04, 2010 23:22 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I Like Your First Chap! It shows a strong action plot... and your cliff hangers are itching me to know wat happens next! Please continue your story! ^_^ I really want to know wats gonna happen next!
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Reviewed By: Shikon baby JK [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2010 12:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you kept me guessing what was going to happen next. I hope you add another chapter soon.
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