| "Completing the Silence" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 16:49 CDT
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me again. This story was so good I had to keep reading. It brought me to tears that instead of taking Duo to the hosiptal and instead of giving Duo the time he needed that Heero wrote him. Ys I know it was hard for him and how much it hurt but it was so much more worse for Duo. And to think the very place Duo was placed he got hurt again and again, yet his love for Heero has no bounds despite the circumstance. (gives a watery smile, feels kind of silly since it is a computer screen) I've read a couple of your other stories as well, you are quite the writer even in the beginning. -sniff- I appreciate ya more ya know. wow and there's a sequel right... I wonder if we'll find out about that weird lady, burnett, who gave Duo those dangerous pills. I feel she was and is bad because instead focusing on the essential clue that Duo's behavior changed after he got the scar above his brow she tried to delve into parts of Duo's psyche that were not directly the root of his pain, the trauma he experienced. onward to the sequel
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 13:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should defiantly be proud! i'M ON ch.3 now and I'm enthralled by your story and I wish that Heero would understand that his behavior isn't helping Duo. I could understand the change but if he doesn't show Duo that he loves him through touch (like hugs, holding him close and kisses of the like) and words instead of making him feel like an alien on display how will that help. Hug him, HOLD him darn it!! (goes onto continue reading)...
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Reviewed By: Prae On: July 20, 2003 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was freaky. And really good too! You should be proud!!! |
Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG! That was too cool. I kept seeing the sequel and thinking, hmm..that looks good, but I wanted to read this first. All I can say is: SHE LIVES! muahahhahahaa. That was the best damned ending!! And I love the portrayal of Duo. You're right, at times your grammer leaves a lot to be desired, but who cares? All that matters is the damn story, and this one is GREAT! Im gonna be grinning for a week! lol. thank you. Leth |
Reviewed By: britt On: January 31, 2003 21:49 CST
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That was sooo good i was crying by the end!!!!!!!!!!! please do make a sequel though!
well see ya
britt |
Reviewed By: Nitelyfe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2002 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have to say you had me riveted through every chapter! Wonderful! I really do hope you have a sequel planned considering the cliffhanger of an epilogue you gave us! ^_^ The angst was great without having to resort to overly cliched squickiness, so I really enjoyed the story! |
Reviewed By: DarkChildANgst On: August 27, 2002 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT |
Reviewed By: Christian On: August 15, 2002 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the saddest fanfiction I have ever read, and one of the very best. You made me actually feel what duo was going through and the hope that Natasha brought. I hope you continue on as an excellent writer because I know that you really are. You rock, keep writing,
Christian
P.S- words cannot truly express the emotions this fanfic has brought out |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... that is seriously all I can say. Ok maybe not but... wow... ^_^
The story is awsome. Really heartfelt and unlike a lot of the more angsty fics its written REALLY well. If you are thinking or writing a sequel to it (you said you might in the epilogue) I for one would deffinetly read it.
Awsome job. You are a very talented writer.
Storm
storm_410@yahoo.com |
