| "Wedding Vows" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Mashiro_Karasu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 09:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it! great story..and the way you ended the chapters was perfect...made sure people came back for more! |
Reviewed By: DamnVespa On: April 10, 2003 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww...that was really really sweet. I loved it. I especially liked how you didn't make Relena into a bitchy type person. She finally saw sense, and I like that. It was a very well written story. I can't wait to read more of yours. Until then. Bye. |
Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 17:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh yeah...That was worth fixing...I love all the flash back-y stuff in this chapter! *sniffle* poor Duo, poor Heero! So glad I could help you fix it! Now I can finally finish it! ^_^
^The Firefaery^ |
Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 16:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay, just had to point out, Chapter Six is from some other story! It isn't For THIS ONE!! ACK! How does Duo get away from the Train???? Now I can't finish the story! Oh no!! Please, please, fix this ASAP! If you have time
^The Firefaery^ @_@ |
Reviewed By: Angela On: December 23, 2002 19:45 CST
Comment/Review:
It was really good, but I think it would have been better if Duo had gotten hit by the train. Since the pilots are the closest in his life,
Quatre could be his next of kin and been called in time to stop the wedding. Heero would come to see him on his deathbed, and they would make up, Heero would call off the engagement. Of course Duo would live, but they wouldn't be so sure so they would marry in the hospital because they don't want to wait a second more. But all would be well. |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2002 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. Really really great. The ending may have been a bit sappy but it was just SO sweet. I found myself grinning like a mad women half way through that last bit. Great job!
Storm
storm_410@yahoo.com |
