|
| "Their Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: their destiny
Reviewed By: kagome15higurashi On: August 21, 2012 08:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please im beging you do another chapter ^_^ please please please | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2012 11:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good one-shot! I really liked this, and look! The formatting is working! I don't know what you finally did different, or if you even did anything different or it just suddenly up and worked for you, but I'm so glad you were able to post this and not have any glitches. Hopefully you can repeat whatever process you used for this and your other stories that you've wanted to post will work as well. But back to this one-shot, I love this kind of plot, where Kagome has to step up and be the protector of Inuyasha for a change instead of the other way around, while he lies injured and she keeps guard. I've seen scenarios similar to this one before, where he's hurt on the night of the new moon, but the market isn't as flooded with them as certain other story lines, and I think you did an exceptional job with the details, including mentioning Kagome had made a barrier with sutras and her arrows to keep evil youkai away so it wasn't just dumb luck that they didn't get attacked by anything during the night. I also don't think I've ever actually seen Kagome sew Inuyasha before, so that part was definitely unique. Inspired by Tangled? Whatever works. I haven't seen that movie but if you recommend it then maybe I'll check it out. Anyway, so good job! I can't wait to see what other gems you've been hanging onto! :-) | Reviewed By: ayupan On: June 15, 2012 08:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOHHHHHHHH, that was sooooo cute. Love it! |
|
|
