| "Syndrome" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: starangel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! loved how you ended it with the scoring....hope you get what I mean. Read it three times, and will read it again!I would give you an eleven but that would break the scale!-AngelStar
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Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 00:27 CDT
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i love your story. it's one of the more unique b/v's i've ever read. i like your writing style as well. i would love to read more of this fic. the ending of the last chapter was too abrupt for your story to have ended. i hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Laina On: June 26, 2003 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey why did you stop updating, its really great so please start updating again. |
Reviewed By: Chibi Beji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 10:37 CST
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Yaaaaayy! And I feel like a dope cheering for this, since you all but promised to never end this one. Ahem. There's a sobering thought for you. Well, it was great while it lasted, and I don't understand how you could give up on reading the works fo Hella, Darke, and other greats, but hey, whatever floats your wagon.
Damn. |
Reviewed By: kainee (kainee1984@yahoo.com) On: February 10, 2003 21:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooo!!! Don't leave!!!!
I like this story a lot! Please finish it!!!!
I like how you make Vegeta real and you show, you don't just tell the reader what's going on!!!
Sorry... incoherent babbling...
Sigh... leave if you have to...
T__T |
Reviewed By: Susan On: November 10, 2002 23:05 CST
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Oh yeah I almost forgot. I don't know what happened to you for you to end up on crutches, but I hope you get well soon. Take care ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: November 10, 2002 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep Bulma you definitely get points for that-LOL! Poor Vegeta, Lord knows what's gonna be going thru that head of his while he's "under". Btw, I reread chap 5 and 6 and you did an excellent job with them. I love Veggie's disgust with the hospital gown as well as his detailed descriptions of all the bones he's broken and the diseases he had gotten. Great job with all 3 chaps. Can't wait to read more ^_^. |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 06:13 CDT
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Y'know, Radu was always my favorite character. heehee.
Anyway, Yay! No Goku! Do you promise? Nothing against the guy, but I highly doubt he and Vegeta pal-ed around like everyone else seems to think. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest On: October 03, 2002 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHH! Don't be scared Veggie! I'm here for you! *frowns* Okay maybe I'm not but I would be if I were anime. Anyway, I'm very interested in this addiction of Bulma's so I'll be back next chapter.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 03, 2002 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! Nice touch with that other couple at the very beginning. Some people just don't care where they are when they decide to air out their dirty laundry ^_^. I think Vegeta was having a deja vu moment before entering that room, because it may have reminded him of where Freeza would practice on him. I'd love to know what he said in his native tongue. Could he be telling those bad memories to "go away"? Anyway, good chap. Anxious to see what happens next. |
Reviewed By: Cherry_Saiya-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2002 22:26 CDT
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This is rather nice....I look forward to more.
~``~Cherry~``~ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 29, 2002 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel so bad for Vegeta. Deep down inside he's scared buy won't show it, and Bulma is concerned and but won't show it either. I guess that's a good thing considering what's about to happen. |
Reviewed By: siefire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2002 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
awesome fic! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2002 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor dear! He's all frighten and stuff. It'll be all right Veggie! I hope. Anyway, great chappie. See ya next time.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 11, 2002 03:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, needless to say I'm already getting worried about the outcome of Vegeta's operation. I mean even Bulma is getting bad vibes. Can't wait to read if my suspicions are correct. Good chapter. |
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