| "The Hidden House" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE DON'T MAKE ME BEG ANYMORE!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 10:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! CONTINUE WRITING THE STORY I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!! THIS IS A SUPER COOL STORY!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Clous On: June 19, 2005 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's so fun to resd and interesting you should write more!
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Reviewed By: Light Angel On: April 23, 2004 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Gooddddddd It's one of the best fanfics I've read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so good lock with the story Emile me at SoarTyliner@yahoo.com or cail me at (248)354-6721 and I have some questions for you Light Angel
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Reviewed By: Hi On: April 20, 2004 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved It! :P
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Reviewed By: lil_angle_v [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww!does there HAVE to be a cliffhanger?plz keep writin!!!!people just all seem to abondon their good work and leave the readers to suffer.i hope you would update soon!!!keep up the good work!
tata!
~Suki |
Reviewed By: inuyoukai2007 On: February 26, 2003 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too many 'ands'. Many connecting words. I love the story though. |
Reviewed By: MoonStarHope On: February 26, 2003 18:32 CST
Comment/Review:
this is really good!!
please write another chapter!!!
and get better soon!!!!!!!!!
~Hope~ |
Reviewed By: smartiebutt On: February 16, 2003 14:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I now believe in the existence of cloud 9! (runs around throwing roses in the air)
I loved this fic. I've been waiting for someone to finally write something like that. By the time I was done reading it I bit of most of my beautiful nails. (small-snif-price to-sob-pay. brakes down it tears.) Please don't torture my poor little mind (and nails) and write the next chapter soon!!! C ya later. |
Reviewed By: YingRui [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! You have to update! I love Serenity's personality! And I especially love the way Serenity told off Pansy as well as the prank played on the five slytherins! |
Reviewed By: UsagiKIK On: February 07, 2003 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am enjoying your fic very much! Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Mieachella The Demon Goddess On: February 03, 2003 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mieachella: WOW!! I love this story! write more!.. must...read....next...chapter....*twitch*
Davis: not again...
Kouji: we're doomed...
Kai: yep.
Kai-Kaichikikilili: mmmhhhmmm.. -_-;
Mizzel: Note To self never let Mieachella Read a great crossover with a little bit evil athoress who made a clify.
Dom: .... umm... No comment?
T-Rexaki: uhhmm.. Ditto?
Duaiya: duble Ditto.
Amerakana: well write more soon or Mieachella is gonna twitch her brains out. * hides a twitching remote* ;P |
Reviewed By: adb On: January 29, 2003 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
oh your really bad for stopping there.... keep it up. |
Reviewed By: XaverriStarCatcher On: January 28, 2003 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic over all. You need to cut down on the descrpitions though. Try not to make them so detailed that you get caught in the details. Try just making casual descriptions. Like instead of describing the whole room in one paragraph try splitting it up with Serenity's movements around the room. I hope you continue writing on this story. It's very good and original. I really enjoyed it. I hope you take this as constructive critism and not as destructive critism. PLease keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Rune On: January 07, 2003 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I rated you this way because you had a very good piece and I hope you write some more on this story.... Please do so.... Loving fan ~Rune |
