| "The Fusions" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 08:10 CST
Comment/Review:
very funny, although i couldn't pronounce half the fusion names
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Reviewed By: Jako On: June 27, 2003 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HURRY UP YOU SON OF A BITCH! I'M DYING HERE!!!! *cough* Um... once again I love the fic and we're all waiting on ya!!!! WE WANT YOU TO DO THE ENTIRE DBZ STORYLINE! MUAHAHAHA!!!! Which means MORE WRITING! Here I'm going to *try* to give you an epiphany...
Freiza: You are flashy gold, how convincing...
Goku: *Looks down pants* Wow! My scalp isn't the only thing that's golden!!!!
Freiza: *Gives a disgusted face* Your stupid! When is this DAMNED planet going to explode anyway?
Goku: You haven't threw the ball down to the core yet.
Freiza: Oh...
*Freiza chucks big energy ball down to the core*
Goku: Okay I think now were supposed to talk for about an hour and then were going to fight some more... then fight some more... then your going to say we've got 15 minutes left... then ten episodes LATER Namek explodes...
*Freiza laughs hysterically*
Freiza: You are no match for me! HAHA!
Then some more mindles rambles and so on... Anyways I'm trying to get my point across that UPDATE NOW! DO I HAVE TO WRITE ANY MORE! DO IT!
~Jako |
Reviewed By: Jako On: June 24, 2003 21:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think my favorite part of any fic, is Funi bashing!!! I hate those pricks! Um, anyways, love the fic, it's SOOOOO FUNNY!!!!! You should do the Freiza saga!!!! Oh my god that would be hilarious!!! AHAHAHAHA!!!! Errr... yeh, love the fic update soon!!!!
~Jako |
Reviewed By: Jashkeera On: October 25, 2002 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is HILARIOUS!! I just about DIED laughing!!! Poor Gohan, no one likes his name! HAHAHA!!! XD |
