| "A Shelter From My Storm" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: lilsaiyin On: June 26, 2003 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on i i cant beleive u just ended the fic like that come on it was getting good to i hope another chapter is written |
Reviewed By: lilsaiyin On: June 26, 2003 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on i i cant beleive u just ended the fic like that come on it was getting good to i hope another chapter is written |
Reviewed By: Inuyasha's_Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm one of th biggest DBZ fan in the world and I can spent a whole day reading their Fan Fictions. Out of all the FF's that try to explain Bulma and Vegeta, this is the BEST!
Please Post The Next Chapter Soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How in hell can you end a story like that? There was practically a lemon hanging right there! I like this story, hurry up with the next chapter!
Oh, and can you review a story I am writing called Goku:A New Life on Earth? I am so desperate for reviews that I have actually resorted to asking people if they can reivew my story. Thanks, bye! |
