"Full of Grace" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 09:35 CST Comment/Review: Why didnt you kill Ryou? Life would be so much more fun that way in the story at least. I like character deaths. I am a sick, twisted sadistic psycho. Oh well, good story |
Reviewed By: ShadowStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 19:58 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I tried SO HARD to get to chapter 3 on ff.net and IT JUST KEPT BREAKING! ;_; I literally got three different types of pages saying it was broken and I've been trying all day x.x But I am SO glad that I found it on here! :) I'm happy now! I really liked it. Ryou angst is good. Very good *grins* |
Reviewed By: Dark Lady Setsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 19:19 CST Comment/Review: oh that was great!! update soon ok cuz damn i really liked this so far!! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 18:41 CST Comment/Review: More! |
Reviewed By: (Some Random Person) On: March 11, 2003 17:57 CST Comment/Review: Umm...like one of your other reviewers said, the song isn't really necessary. I mean, it's not bad that you have it but...do you get what I mean? I don't want to make you feel bad or anything (that's the last thing I want to do!), but...ugh, I'm terrible at this. *sigh*
All in all, this really isn't that bad. Honestly. I'm...brain dead at the moment...that's all. |
Reviewed By: Karadaki On: January 17, 2003 18:57 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: UPDATE THIS SOOOOOOOON!!!!! I LUV THIS, ITS SO COOL!!!!!! UPDATE IT!!!!UPDATE IT!!!!UPDATE IT!!!!UPDATE IT!!!!UPDATE IT!!!!UPDATE IT!!!!UPDATE IT!!!!UPDATE IT!!!!UPDATE IT!!!!UPDATE IT!!!!UPDATE IT!!!!UPDATE IT!!!!UPDATE IT!!!!UPDATE IT!!!!UPDATE IT!!!!UPDATE IT!!!!UPDATE IT!!!!! I WANNA READ MORE!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 22:01 CST Comment/Review: Wowie! I like this one! |
Reviewed By: BakuraFan On: December 22, 2002 16:26 CST Comment/Review: Is that it? No more? Great job. |
Reviewed By: DarkGatomon, the Kuroneko Yajuu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 18:18 CST Comment/Review: Hmm... I'm not really sure that being a songfic adds to it. I mean, I know your format wouldn't work without the breaks forced by the song, but that doesn't mean that is should have that format in the first place.
I've run into less songfics than I can count on a single hand that are actually the better for having their song. The song you chose is a good one, I'm not denying that -- it's just that it doesn't fit the fic. Oh, its mood is right, and all, but I don't see how it is related. Perhaps I'm just not looking deeply enough. Or perhaps I just don't get songfics (a very serious possibility).
It was a good story, though, and I like it the way it is. Yes, it has a slightly unfinished ending -- it's not all tied up neatly -- but it's a very Bakura sort of ending. The quiet desperation even when he's seeking hope. If you look at it from the point of view of plot, yes, it's unfinished. But if you look at it emotionally -- which I think is the proper way, for something like this -- then I think it actually says something very important about Bakura and about the way he lives, and thinks, and feels.
Or maybe I'm just over-analyzing it.
Regardless, it's a neat little fic, and poignant. Good job, especially for the first time in a genre! |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 09:00 CST Comment/Review: *Yamipingpong* And that's the end of Bakura...Oh darn.
*pingpong* And now I'm torn between Bakura and Seto! ~pouts~ Not fair.
*YamiPP* ~laughing quietly~
*pingpong* ~pulls out Bicurabox's scythe~ ~Sweetly~ What?
*YamiPP* ~Laughing harder~ |
Reviewed By: Kitty On: November 13, 2002 21:32 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey Tefla it's us. Kitty and Amethyst. ^_^ So you tried to kill Ryou did you, * Gives Tefla an evil glare * well you shall pay for your wrong doing. ^_^ Well it was good, but don't ever get any closer to killing my Ryou. * Glomps Ryou, kisses his cheek and smiles ^_^ * Well I got to go, bye byez. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2002 13:39 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: O.O *twitch* You... almost... killed... him... *faints* @()@...
Ryou:*explains Sam's STRANGE behaviour* She has a thing about character deaths. Particularly me, Mokuba or Yugi... She does like your work... Honest. Please write other fanfics. It's great.
*Sam composes herself and turns to Ryou lovingly* Thanks for covering for me... *kisses Ryou on the cheek*
Ryou: *blushes*
Bakura:*fuming* HEY!!!!
*Sam turns into the monster from 'The New Authoress'* WWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTT!?!?!?
Bakura: O_O' Eh heh... nothing.
Sam: *goes back to normal* ^_^ *Huggles Ryou*
Ryou: *still blushing* |