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| "The Doctor's Office" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2003 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was sweet and terrifying at the same time. I too once had a fear of needles. When I was four *yes I remember it like it was yesterday* the doctor raised the needle to give me a shot, I took one look at it and ran clear out of the hospital. I locked myself in my dad's car too. ^__^ Keep writing about Sage and his loving family. I'm enjoying reading about their lives immensely. | Reviewed By: Vega Obscura The King [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2002 00:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow...i just finished reading the story b4 this and this 1, you did a very good job. the first story was a bit long, but awesome none the less. This one was also good. I read the 3rd 1 already. VERY VERY GOOD | Reviewed By: zingzinglee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kawaii!!
I've just read this fic three times just to enjoy the kawaii factor. And the destruction of a 12 year-old bully by a 2 year-old. Oh my gosh and the seen with the three little warriors tail in tail *faint*. O^_^O
*Sniff*, now what am I gonna read on a weekend? Guess I'lll go back and actually finish my own fanfictions *grumble* O-_-O | Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sulks around in one corner depressed. Sniffles can be heard along the lines of "It's over.. finished.. owari.. *sniff* No more "Birth of a prince" *sniff why.. so soon.. We just got to know each other..." when something catches her attention
*pokes her head out of the corner and her misery suspiciously and scans the environment
Hmm.. I thought I heard little Sagey laugh somewhere around here.. but nooo, that must have been a hallucination, the story is over and it's probably just my overactive imagination..
*eyes go wide as she spots a small child about the age of two walking towards her, his cute little blueish-black tail waving in anticipation
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!
It can't be!! Sage? But where.. who.. what..
*discovers a piece of paper that the little chukra has clutched tightly in that adorable little tail of his
*carefully unwinds it from the chibis grip and settles down to read, while Sage crawls into her lap, and snoozes off looking pretty exhausted, sometimes murmuring something about "needles.. scary.."
*After an considerablke amount of time she looks up again with tears in the corners of her eyes
*sniffles*
A new little Sage-story just for itsy-bitsy meeeeeee???
*a grin starts to spread over her face enlightening it like the sun does a brand new day
*chuckles extremely delighted
WAAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAA!!! Thank you! Domo arrigatooooooooo!!!
That was so cute and so funny.. Poor Goku, still not rid of his fear of needles and poor Sage, whatever should he make of that strange behaviour of his beloved baka?
I especially loved the scene with Bulma and the bullies mother: *laughs*
"I hope your twelve-year old kid is not too embarassed when my two-year old apologizes to him, because he damaged his arm, because he was being mean to his five-year old brother."
*rolls on the floor laughing
This sounds like something that might really have happened.. sheesh I sure wish all bullies would get a lesson like that!
Talon, that was priceless, and you really saved my day. Guess what I'll be off to the christening of my little niece later today, and this story just seems to fit sooo good to my little nephew who is also two years old! I guess I'll be laughing every time I see him around now! Alas, your magic worked again...
Thank you, o almighty author!
*hugs Talon and scuttles off grinning like madly mumbling something about adorable chibis under her breath |
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