| "Peanut Butter" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2003 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmfao! ^__^ That was funny! For Yamcha, not so funny, but he deserved it. The balls of that guy! How dare he eat Sage's peanut butter? I'm sure that the baka human won't make that mistake again. |
Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2002 18:16 CST
Comment/Review:
sooo sweet, got a hole in my teeth! *smiles*
Poor Yamucha... I've never did like him but you do some pretty cruel Yamucha-bashing here.. *ggg* Oh well, I still laughed my ass off!
Though I must say, as cute as Sage is, I'd be thinking twice now if I wanted a child as badly spoilt as that... *gggg |
Reviewed By: zingzinglee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2002 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
talon sage, you just made me laff so hard I chipped a tooth! Who told Yamucha to go sticking his knife into strange peanut butter containers hrm?
and please post the pics! who could possibly resist peanut butter-covered chibis with chocholate milk? |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura the King (not logged in) On: October 27, 2002 13:40 CST
Comment/Review:
really??? Post the Kawaii pics plz!!!!!!!!!!!! talon sage, ur stories are very very good. I just love the character Sage in this story! |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2002 13:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Kitty!!!!!!!!!!!! *glomps the lil neko!!!* I didn't know you were over here!!! *kisses the cat UP!!!!!!!! Well kitty dear, now you have to post your Peanut Butter pictures, don't you!!! *giggles* *points* Everyone, this naughty neko drew some of the KAWAIIEST chibi pics for Peanut Butter!!!!!!!! WAI!!!!! *kiss cat again*
Talon LOVES naughty neko!!! |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura The King [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2002 08:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Kawaii! I just finished reading this one. When Sage started to freak out about HIS Peanut butter, I was laughing to myself thinking "O Shit, Yamcha, your in some very very deep shit now".
Continue with "THE SAGE SAGA" |
Reviewed By: KuroKoneko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2002 11:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! Talon-chan!!! Talon-chan!!!! Kitty love ya!!! Yus!! Kitty do!!!!!
XD |
