"Gradual Love" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Liea another?! Reviewed By: Shishome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 08:59 CDT Comment/Review: hej du Liea til? or if you can't real norwegain i say hey you Liea too
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Reviewed By: Abby On: March 21, 2003 14:58 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh Wow! please continue with this line of thought! I've never read anything so detailed about Goku and Chichi. Its great! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 12:45 CST Comment/Review: YES!Another update finally! Well, I'm, glad that Chi-Chi loved him enough to try and help him out of his situstion. Hurry and update! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover On: January 07, 2003 16:30 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AAARRRGGGHHH!!! Every stoory I've checked for updates hasn't been updated yet! Can you please hurry? I'm dying for a good story, and this really seems to be a good one. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2002 17:10 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hi, it's me again. If you don't have Chi-Chi pull Goku out of the mess she got him, into, I'l kill you!(not really, it's just that it's not fair that Goku had to deal with all thease guilty feelings.) |
Reviewed By: Gita [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 18:54 CST Comment/Review: This is really starting to depress me. I keep checking, almost every day, faithfully, full of hope. I even went over to my friends house when our power went out, just in case. I will be deeply dissapointed if this is not continued...I'll force my boyfriend and my brother to read it...I can Beta read it for you if it's needed. (I don't write much but my grammar is good)...Just Please Continue |
Reviewed By: Gita [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 18:54 CST Comment/Review: This is really starting to depress me. I keep checking, almost every day, faithfully, full of hope. I even went over to my friends house when our power went out, just in case. I will be deeply dissapointed if this is not continued...I'll force my boyfriend and my brother to read it...I can Beta read it for you if it's needed. (I don't write much but my grammar is good)...Just Please Continue |
Reviewed By: Gita [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2002 11:41 CST Comment/Review: What would it take to get you to update this? I don't have money, but I'd be willing to leave more reviews or something if it would help. Please? Pretty Please? The suspense is slowly eating away at my will to continue checking for an update every day. Waiting to see how Goku will react ....( OH PLEEASE!) |
Reviewed By: Orestes17 On: November 05, 2002 18:29 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ... Why did you stop?!! And why the HELL isn't anyone ELSE reading this?! This is by far the best Gokou/Chichi story I've read so far. And I've seen my share. I am very pleased with the way you're portraying Gokou, keeping him In-Character. I'm sorry I didn't review this sooner. I was reading this chapter with 6 minutes to spare before I left for school. And I read the other chapters, don't get me wrong. I just usually review at the last chapter. Everything is perfect! I can't wait until you post more. Please do so soon.
~Rae-chan |
Reviewed By: Gita [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 19:43 CST Comment/Review: So I see you moved this story to M.M.-a good move. I read this story before on F.F.net and have been waiting what seems like a long time for you to update it. I really want to see how Goku will handle somthing serious that he can't just beat up and make go away. Different subject matter, thats for sure. Glad to see you're still out there, and will finish this. More Please! |