| "Spirit of the Dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 08:37 CST
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*Pingpong* /finishes reading the story huge grin on face/
*YamiPP* /arms crossed looking mad/ thinking-
*Aibou& HikariPP* /playing poker for Duel Monsters cards/
*pingpong* That was cool!!!! Write more write more writemorewritemorewritemore....
*YamiPP* Ahem. Excuse us, she forgot to take her morphine pills today. /forces the pills down her throat/ Ok, she's better now.
*pingpong* That was a good story, plz write more. |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2002 08:48 CST
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*pingpong* Cute!!!
*YamiPP* riiiightttt.
*HikariPP* That's what I thought: Who likes babies?
*AibouPP* I do.
*YamiPP* And you're the one who is in love with Yami Yugi.
*AibouPP* Your point?
*pingpong* Having alter egos just got alot harder... Well I loved the story, though I reccomend that you used a little more detail when talking about military power and maybe give a better description of the people that you include. The setting needs a little fleshing out, but that's all I have to criticize right now, cause this song is stumping me so far. |
Reviewed By: KittyKatAmby On: December 01, 2002 12:22 CST
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I really like your story, it's just what I've been in the mood for lately. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 08:28 CST
Comment/Review:
*pingpong* Puleeeaaaasssssseeee! You can't keep me in suspense! It's not fair! Pulease write more!
*YamiPP* Once again, no comment. |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 08:43 CST
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*pingpong* Once again, keep going, you can't leave off on Chapter 7!
*YamiPP* /looks around/ No comment. |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 08:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Neatness! Keep going and this will become one of the best stories that I have read in a long time! |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2002 08:20 CST
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*pingpong* If I can be so liberal to ask...
*YamiPP* She wants to know if you had any perticulary melody in mind for that song and if you don't she wants to compose some and send it to you when she has the time to.
*pingpong* Subtle, ain't she? That was good, and I love the song. |
