"Daughter" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: adfa On: May 02, 2005 06:56 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I liked this story. I figured I just HAD to download the song and find out how it sounded. The story was a little bit short which was a disappointment but the feelings it evokes is very good. You had a perfect song choice and wrote this thing almost perfectly. Work on the length a little bit and it would become perfect virtually.
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Reviewed By: LadyArra [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 16:27 CST Comment/Review: Wow. Extremely powerful. I did a little piece on Asuka's realtionship with her mother (its not posted), but this really touches everything... |