"Orbitanium" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Aurora_Glory_Alice On: December 02, 2002 00:00 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I like the depth you gave to their relationship... very cool. This is the first songfic I've ever read. I avoided them in the past, but this one really fits! |
Reviewed By: Lady Nightshade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2002 14:29 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: very nice very very nice |
Reviewed By: Derr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2002 04:22 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really enjoyed reading this. You did an excellent job in painting a deeper and more sympathetic picture of Chichi than is usually depicted. A few tiny edits may be needed (an occasional misspelling, one or two spots where a comma would improve the flow, etc.), but on the whole, very well-written and original. Thanks! |