Reviewed By: Viki/ Juu- chan On: December 12, 2002 17:57 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: The style of writing is ok, only problem is that i got confused. Really, until near the end did i find out he married maron, not juu.maybe reading 2 much krillin cheats on juu fics have something 2 do with it *shrugs*.From what i read s/g is top...Very original, after all, this is really the first fic i've read where kril- never mind, i'm sure u all already know what i'm talking 'bout. Fic is really interesting- my opinion only- so over all, it's basically a 9 or 10...explained enough?????? |