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| "Vegeta's Lesson" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2002 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*the shudders and shivers subside ... but do not yet go as the heart continues to race*
Dammit Tina, that was ... so friggin erotic. Yes, it was DAMN good. It was like ... as I was reading it I was going, "This is wrong because she thinks he's going to 'rape' her, but ..." Goddamn, it was so forbidden and almost wrong, but ... SO damn ... ugh!! *chuckles* That makes NO sense, does it?? Let's just say that Bulma is the luckiest woman ever because SHE got to seduce him. What a LUCKY woman!! Ah yes, the seduction of a woman does WONDERS for the man, Vegeta, you'll learn. DAMN he's a good learner!! ERRGH!! That was GREAT!! I have to say, that was THE best lemon I've ever read. Why? Well, like I started to mention earlier, this one REALLY affected me. I mean, I've read lemons and, uh, liked them before, but ... DAMN!! By the end I was SO well ... "overheated" and shaky. If you get my drift. ;} It reminded me of, well, someone that I, uh, know. (YES, him!!) I am just having MAJOR problems thinking/forming coherent senteces because I'm writing this directly after finishing it so I could capture the ... effect. *heh*
Well, Tina, you did it again. And well ... this was just awesome, I mean it. I've wondered what could happen between V/B if they got together on Namek for a ... well, at least ONE round but this was AWEsome. And I almost melted into a puddle onto the floor right then and there when I read some of your most poetic words EVER:
But the smoldering look he gave her as he slipped the Saiyan armor over her head made her tremble. There was such desire in that gaze, that it belied his words.
*shivers again* Wow .... you're on a role! That new guy must be adding to the fire that we know as "creativity." I could be wrong but, well ... if this keeps up, I may never be heard from again because I suffered from a heart attack brought on by your lemon stuffs. *winks* just kidding, but I thought you'd like to know that they at least made MY heart race. (probably not, but I had to get it out of my system SOME how) wow.......... I think I need a nice...long...SHOWER tonight. ^.~
*the shudders and shivers subside ... but do not yet go as the heart continues to race*
Dammit Tina, that was ... so friggin erotic. Yes, it was DAMN good. It was like ... as I was reading it I was going, "This is wrong because she thinks he's going to 'rape' her, but ... " Goddamn, it was so forbidden and almost wrong, but ... SO damn ... ugh!! *chuckles* That makes NO sense, does it?? Let's just say that Bulma is the luckiest woman ever because SHE got to seduce him. What a LUCKY woman!! Ah yes, the seduction of a woman does WONDERS for the man, Vegeta, you'll learn. DAMN he's a good learner!! ERRGH!! That was GREAT!! I have to say, that was THE best lemon I've ever read. Why? Well, like I started to mention earlier, this one REALLY affected me. I mean, I've read lemons and, uh, liked them before, but ... DAMN!! By the end I was SO well ... "overheated" and shaky. If you get my drift. ;} It reminded me of, well, someone that I, uh, know. (YES, him!!) I am just having MAJOR problems thinking/forming coherent senteces because I'm writing this directly after finishing it so I could capture the ... effect. *heh*
Well, Tina, you did it again. And well ... this was just awesome, I mean it. I've wondered what could happen between V/B if they got together on Namek for a ... well, at least ONE round but this was AWEsome. And I almost melted into a puddle onto the floor right then and there when I read some of your most poetic words EVER:
But the smoldering look he gave her as he slipped the Saiyan armor over her head made her tremble. There was such desire in that gaze, that it belied his words.
*shivers again* Wow .... you're on a role! That new guy must be adding to the fire that we know as "creativity." I could be wrong but, well ... if this keeps up, I may never be heard from again because I suffered from a heart attack brought on by your lemon stuffs. *winks* just kidding, but I thought you'd like to know that they at least made MY heart race. (probably not, but I had to get it out of my system SOME how) wow.......... I think I need a nice...long...SHOWER tonight. ^.~
PS ... you should add "COMEDY" to the genres because of the stuff in the begging with Krillin *LMAO* and Vegeta's comment to Gohan about, uh, I don't remember the exact words cause I STILL can't think straight but ... the thing about whether or not he'd like to have a go with her as well. o.O *LMFAO* | Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I left one on the orginal and this was great lol see yeah on the flip side | Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa..well..I liked the lemon but the idea of the whole rape thing..it just ain't kool..for real.
Rape isn't a kool thing at all. Vegeta wouldn't in my perspective of him he wouldn't rape. he has far too much pride for that. As does bulma she would probably rather die than be used like that.
But over all I think that the story was well written..and it was very enjoyable...I think..Great fic though for people that like this kinda thing..Over all it was actualy really great. | Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 10:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Water, water!!! woohoo! that was hot! Me want more!!!!
~Blue Dragon~ | Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: December 09, 2002 05:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girl, I don't know how you keep doing it! Another awesome job. | Reviewed By: Susan On: December 09, 2002 04:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent!! Loved the lemon candy. There aren't enough "B/V gettin it on in Namek" fics. Great job on this one ^_^. | Reviewed By: killarri [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 00:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Krillin=Vegeta's sex slave ROFLMAO!!!
The lemon was great! Keep writing! | Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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AHHHHHHH....lemonie freshness!! lol pretty good! darn, i should be asleep by now...oh well!! | Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was great loved it | Reviewed By: sweet lemons On: January 19, 2003 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awsome!!! I just love lemons!!!
Se-quel! Se-quel! *continues chant*
please continue. ^_~ | Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 11:48 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To find a way to express how much I enjoyed this fic. 8-D
First off, I've never read another ff with even a hint of Krillen/Vegeta. What an absolute hoot!
The implications of rape were obviously tense, but I think the Vegeta we were all introduced to would have, unfortunately, not given it a second thought to rape Bulma and kill her later.
I think you did a good job of not 'glamorizing' a heinous act of violence and turned the fic into something so many of us (ok, I!) desperately crave - a juicy Bulma/Vegeta lemon. And I must say, that was one of the juiciest lemons I've ever read!
Good friggin' grief, woman - I couldn't walk after I read it!
Meliza | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
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