| "More Annoying That You Could Imagine" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Akira and Yami Akira On: July 24, 2003 13:44 CDT
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I read this full thing it was pretty good.said Akira. Yay I agree. said Yami Akira(for once)
Also it's similiar to how I feel at school.said Akira. Though my Yami actually goes there in physcial form, For me to protect her said Yami Akira. Do not.Do too Do not Do too Do not.DO TOO
DOOO NOOOOT well my throat hurts so that was an interesting fic Down to earth also. |
Reviewed By: Shadow Kitten 9831 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 07:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fic. Please add more chapters. |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2003 15:20 CDT
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This is easily one of the most amusing things I've read in a veeery long time... At first it seemed to be from (yami)Bakura's POV... Wow! Very well accomplished! You achieved the bipolar, insane, multiple personality angle very well *pokes head* I'm all of those things, so... yeah. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Yuki On: February 24, 2003 10:32 CST
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P.S. I have not gone to middle school yet! ^_^0 Next year though! But this is just how I plan to start my first year. Be friends with the wall and floor. -_-0 Literly, I am. And I been worring about where the classrooms are, who I am going to sit next to, what we re lerning, and the class who has to know who I am. And to top this all off! I got a hair cut that I did not want. The lady cut it wrong and now everyone that just met me thinks I am a boy! Even a pollice man! -_-0 And I look like a i am 16 years old. Since I am not flat. And yes, People look at my hair as I did not know it was messy or weird. Or even turning a differint color. Can anyone guess? Yes. White. -_-0 I am screwed. |
Reviewed By: Yuki On: February 24, 2003 10:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love It write more! |
Reviewed By: Shashomiru On: February 19, 2003 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh!By the way.The fourth of March is my birthday.I'll be 13.Please email me. -Shashomiru |
Reviewed By: Shashomiru On: February 19, 2003 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!Awsome story!You are so hilarious!Right now my only friends are really only Mr.Wall and Mr.Floor,too.I'm lucky if I even get out of the classroom before the first minute out of 4 wastes away.There are so many bullies I'm sort of scared to even walk the halls.I'm not exactly popular.Everybody sees me nice,I guess they just don't want to see me that way.I don't talk much(at school)so I don't interact with too many people to make friends.So I keep myself busy by thinking of my stories I'm always working on(instead of listeningto the teacher).I'm always so scared about the littlest things,but on the fourth of March,maybe I'll toughen up a bit and actually defend myself.Gee,I sure hope Bob will be there to watch and protect me. -Shashomiru |
Reviewed By: Yami no Chrestes On: February 18, 2003 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chrses: Poor Bakura...What can I say?
Bakura:(growles) Ypu can say that you'll help help me get out of school.
Chrestes: You know, for a tomb robber you aren't very interested in Egypt.
Bakura: Didn't you hear me before, I DON"T WANT TO TALK ABOUT THAT.
Chrestes: Shhhh, you'll wake up Darina. She's too tired from chasing Joey around, so she went to bed an hour ago. And if she wakes up...Well, it means trouble for you.
Bakura: Oh, really, what could she do? Here, see, HEY(Both hear a loud growl and running. Darina ripps in with her pajamas on...)
Bakura:(Nearly choked on laughing) Yah, reeaaalll scary. Ha-ha-ha.
Darina: BAKURA! Come here, I'm gonna get you!(Takes out an umbrella and hits Bakura on the head with it).
Chrestes: Um, Darina, we're on broadcast.(Darina blushes and stops hitting Bakura)
Darina: Of who, Chrestes?
Chrestes: That author...The Evil Laugh or something like that...
Darina: Cool! Hey, I read your fic. I was laughing really hard. Keep it up, i especually liked the first and the third chapters.
Bakura: Yah, and you're supposed to be the nice one...
Chrestes:(laughs) great story, by the way, Evil Laugh, and don't worry, Bakura will be fine here.
Bakura: Yah, as long Darina doesn't smak me on the head with that umbrella.(Darina and Chrestes laugh) |
Reviewed By: Silvermoonstar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree blue and orange IS a ugly combination... I checked it out on the paint program, well, anyway...nice fic
-silvermoonstar |
Reviewed By: Leviathon_Squid [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2002 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it!It's funny,but how long will it go on?
0_0 |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 20:42 CST
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Great job! I love the way that you use your adjectives and adverbs! It just ties it all together with a bow! Laugh on Evil Laugh! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: December 14, 2002 22:56 CST
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Cool. I think you should write more. It's funny. ^_^ |
