| "The Ascension Trilogy, Book 1: The Coming Ice Age" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 09:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 3 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great.
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Reviewed By: Wreath of roses [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 20:18 CST
Comment/Review:
I just realized it is spelled Knorr! I love the story as always but I'm going to have a hard time dismissing those Killer Onion Dip of Death monsters, from my brain. Then again my mind's ideas seldom concur with the rest of the human race! |
Reviewed By: Wreath of roses [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 20:13 CST
Comment/Review:
I really, really love this story! The scene with Puu and Janus made me a bit teary. This was such a great chapter and so full of different elements. The emotional recovery of Usagi, the confrontation with Janus, and the coming of the ice giants from Knor(I'm glad you didn't spell it Knorr, I believe that that is a type of soup mix ^_~) Anyway all soups aside, keep up the great work! Ja. |
Reviewed By: Mai On: February 03, 2003 06:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I gotta know what happens next...
keep writing ^^ |
Reviewed By: Wreath of roses [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story so far! The relationships between the charcters are great! And there's just enough suspense to really keep things interesting. I did spot a few grammatical errors, but on the whole this piece is written very well. I look forward to reading more soon! Ja. |
Reviewed By: Kimiko S. On: January 11, 2003 02:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is really good. I can't help but wonder why Michiru doesn't like Janus. Keep it up. I especially like how the senshi have grown up and followed their dreams. It gives you a different take on how things really are at times. Setsuna doesn't really sound like herself and at times it seems as if she's droning on and on, but hey, its not like you care is it? All I know is, this is really good. I can't wait 'til the next chapter. Until then, ciao. |
