"Twenty-Four Hours, One Last Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: RedICULoUslY_goodLOoKiNg On: November 15, 2003 02:55 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WOZIZ omgosh can this fanfic write get anymore betta...opps soree for being a FRESHIE...but dude this is really good...ummm no great please keep it coming b.coz it's **kewl
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Reviewed By: ~Krissy~ On: December 23, 2002 18:15 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: That was beautiful. *whispers "I literally got all teary eyed shhh don't tell no one knows i do that"* I really loved that it made me feel all lovey dovey lol REALLY BEAUTIFUL!! Hey you can continue this and pretend this Majin Buu thing never happened ^_^ hee hee All this is so romancy and sex isn't even in it well technichly(not that it's a bad thing but it's a nice touch to feel the romance ,and sex doesn't have to be involved so soon)I don't know if you even feel like continuing it after all it is a oneshot BUT WHO SAYS IT HAS TO STAY THAT WAY! Well keep it up with this awesome work. I wanna see more of this great stuff!! |